[Quick Transmigration] Oh No, the Protagonists Have Fallen for Me Again

The author has made rapid progress. The description of the emotions in the second world is obviously smoother, and the setting is more interesting. After reading the short stories on the author's homepage, the writing is really good. It can be seen that he is good at sour and sweet stories. I really like this kind of delicate emotions. Moreover, the characters written are generally more three-dimensional. There is no inexplicable love drama, and there is no blind description of how deep the love is, or the daily interactions between them. It is specific and detailed. There is no need to deliberately let the character shout directly, "I like you", but it is slowly revealed from between the lines, making the reader unconsciously feel touched. It feels like the character seems to like Shen Du a little bit. Seeing that in the apocalypse, Gu Xingzhou felt sorry for Lu Linchuan but was helpless towards him. This contradiction is really fascinating. Keep reading and want to see how the two of them will develop in the future. You can read Gu Xingzhou's care and concern for Lu Linchuan. Maybe he doesn't like Lu Linchuan at this moment. It should be regarded as friendship, but who says that the intimacy of friendship is not touching?

It feels more real than those with a score of 9 or more. Every character has flesh and blood. It feels like JJ's previous novels. It's so beautiful. How can I find other novels in the future? Not enough at all

My thoughts after watching Two Worlds (personal subjective remarks [laughing]): It's a very good-looking fast-travel novel. The ups and downs of the plot never feel abrupt, and even make people feel that each world is very full. Although it is a fast-travel novel, it allows people to carefully appreciate the completeness of each world, making me feel that every world is alive. As a fast traveler, Shen Du tries his best to play the role of the original owner, but the tenderness engraved in his bones will still leak out unintentionally. For example, the "original owner" has never been a holster in Shen Du's eyes, and Shen Du will never look at the traces left by the original owner with the attitude of a bystander. , He would carefully feel the past/pain of the original owners, and complete the characters of the original owners on the basis of completing the plot nodes, making me feel that these "original owners" were never missing in the plot, but that they had a complete life of their own. When dealing with the protagonist, he will not go into tasks with the attitude of "the protagonist is invincible in the world". He will consider everyone before doing anything, and will even consider the things/roles that will be involved after his "character" leaves, instead of casually "finishing the task and leaving". Shen Du is gentle and tough, and the protagonists are unconsciously attracted to him due to his charming personality. Sometimes I don't know if he doesn't care about himself or is influenced by the original owner. I feel that sometimes doing tasks consumes myself [thinking], but it does not hinder Shen Du. He is really a protagonist that I like very much.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot and themes can be great [Blowing Kiss], but I feel like there are a lot of repetitive words, and one thing needs to be repeated several times, which is a bit redundant. It's okay to emphasize it, but it's a bit too much, and the character design is a bit confusing (not referring to the role-playing character of the original owner of Small World), which is the protagonist himself. But the writing is getting better and better and progressive.

It's good-looking. Each world has a relatively long timeline, but each character is well-developed and very individual. The tone of the whole film has a sense of pain. Nothing shocking happens, just some daily things that happen in different eras and backgrounds. But I cried in every volume. It's a bit slow, but the plot won't make you feel bored or sleepy. It took me a day to catch up. I can't believe that I relied heavily on a game and actually read the book for a whole day. All in all, I highly recommend getting into it! ! The second world: "Those who are stubborn will have a bad life." "Brother Chao is lucky, I'm watching over you." "Hurry up"

After watching the first world and the second world, I cried and got rid of my rhinitis. I have to say, the author wrote it really well. There aren't many holes dug, and they can be filled in very quickly, basically maintaining a light feeling of refreshment hhh. The emotional lines are also very delicate. Most of the time, the characters are attracted to the protagonist because of their behavior, rather than just their appearance, which is really good! The rational filling makes the character more three-dimensional. And after the protagonist leaves, there is no such routine (the kind that without the protagonist will lead to death, or go crazy. And after finishing the table, there is no bloody struggle in a large space, it is round and realistic and romantic). The logical chain is also very normal, and you can feel that the author's writing style is improving. Hhh, although I personally am not used to short paragraphs, the overall expression is still very good. I think the score can be higher. Come on! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This Invincible Universe-level book is so beautiful, it's so good that when I read it, I didn't know that anyone next to me was dead. I don't know what to say, but can you all read it? People who haven't read this book will regret it for the rest of their lives. . . And then, I really want to beg you, can you really go and see it? The plot is smooth, the characters are full, and it is very enjoyable to read. No matter what kind of person you are, you will fall in love with this novel after reading it. There are only two kinds of people in this world, those who fall in love with this novel and those who haven't read it yet. . @, Please rate this novel. Next I will use the most direct , the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least inked, the most painful, the most merciless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least grinding, the least The least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most relieving, the most superior, the most energetic, the most enjoyable, and the most brutal. Let me tell you that this book is particularly beautiful. Uh-huh, please watch. This book is really beautiful. The plot is exquisite and the protagonist is very charming and has a very high IQ. The supporting characters are full of flesh and blood. . After reading this one, I am no longer in the mood to read other novels. I beg the author to update 20 chapters a day. I beg God to make this book a hit. OK? So pretty. ,. I wanted to cry when I saw it. It was the first time I saw such a perfect taste in Tomato. . I'm going to fall in love with the author. Author, i love u,.

Wuwuwuwuwu is so good, but the author why the tumor in front of my chest stopped jumping after I read it [crying][crying] (a bit sadistic), the plot is really great, the structure is very compact, although it is a fast time travel, the world line is very complete, the emotions in the first world are already very delicate, but the emotions in the second world are deeper and smoother, the characters in each world are very independent and distinctive, our protagonist baby is a gentle cat, the wing of salvation and the light of hope. All in all, it's very good-looking and highly recommended. [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

I've only read the first short story so far, and overall it's pretty good. But there are a few points that make me particularly uncomfortable, that is, I keep reliving the things that the protagonist has done before. I know that the author wants to reflect the difficulty of the protagonist and the pity or apology of the protagonist in the original text for him. It just feels sour, but it is very tiring for people who keep reading it over and over. The words that appear most often in the whole film are probably "He knows, he understands, he doesn't understand, he thinks of it" I hope the second small world will reduce this problem.

Nice! I really like the character creation in the work. I can confirm that the protagonist is a normal adult with a sense of boundaries, processing ability and a stable mentality (the weakest emotional aspect has also grown steadily!). This is something I rarely see in other books. It is like finding gold. The settings of the protagonist and the system are simply interspersed and communicated in the performance of the entire world without any sudden drama. It is a character who will feel warm and happy when you look at it. In addition, the shaping of other people in each world and the small settings of the world view can be seen that the author wants to make it more perfect. The author writes everyone as a "human", I like this very much! In addition: I saw what the author said and found that when the teacher posted a world, he would also start to think about the next world. It was really amazing! Now that I have seen the fairy tale wizard, I am looking forward to the development of the story and what new stories there will be in the next world! ☺️