Transmigrate to Hollywood: A Songwriting God Falls for a Soccer Legend

It's obviously written by a novice; the sentences and paragraphs are repetitive, and the pacing isn't great. Some parts are too wordy, such as the repetitive social media comments about the song release. Other parts are too brief, rushing through the story, like the part where the male and female leads meet and fall in love—love at first sight and then forever—which feels unrealistic.

This is a very nice sweet novel. While it's described as plagiarism, the system only appears briefly at the very beginning, and the plagiarized content is limited to a song of the same name. It also avoids the typical plagiarism tropes. This novel is more like a Kakashi fanfiction romance, with a narrative-driven plot and a fast-paced overall development.

Keep writing, Kaka! You must keep going!

It's so good! Because of this author's writing, I, someone who knows nothing about football but only three players, got to know Kaká and became a fan. Now I spend all my time searching for and watching his works on Bilibili—his youthful, adorable, and handsome appearance, and now his refined and elegant good looks! The author wrote so well, and I'm already sad it's finished. I hope to see more Kaká stories in the future.

It's not bad, but the later parts mainly focus on the male lead, with less emphasis on the female lead's career and their relationship.

I feel the author's writing is very warm and cozy, I like it 😳, but I feel the character descriptions are a bit problematic, the female lead feels a bit like a tool later on.

I hope this guy will finally speak up. He's always so tolerant and always says yes, but he never communicates properly. After all, he and the female lead have been married for many years. I hope she won't spoil him. 😢 I hope Kaka can be more proactive, at least try to create opportunities for herself. She just stays silent and keeps training. She needs to be kinder to herself 🥺.

It's good, and the pacing is quite fast. Looking forward to more updates! Recommended for a sweet romance! 👩‍❤️‍👨

You can tell the author likes Kaka from between the lines, but it all happened too fast~😅

So good, so good, hahaha