Transmigrate to Hollywood: A Songwriting God Falls for a Soccer Legend

At first glance, you can tell that it was written by a newbie. The sentences and paragraphs are repeated, and the rhythm is not very good. Some parts of the writing are too verbose, for example, the social media comments in the song release section are too repetitive. Some parts are too simple and pass by in a blink of an eye. For example, the part where the male and female protagonists meet and fall in love, falling in love at first sight and then falling in love until forever, is very unrealistic. But there are no major problems overall. The feeling of a sweet story is well written, and there are no inexplicable branch plots. The theme is firmly grasped, and it can be read. Come on. In the beginning, the heroine's career was written, and the male protagonist was like a pendant; in the middle period, the male and female protagonists fell in love, interacted and had daily life; now, the man's career is vigorous, and the female protagonist has become a pendant.

It's a nice little sweet article. It's said to be Wenzhaogong, but in fact the system only appears at the beginning, and the content of Wenzhaogong is limited to songs of the same name, not to mention the typical plot of Wenzhaogong. This article is more like a Kaka fan romance article. The plot is narrative-oriented, and the overall development is very fast-paced. The relationship between the two is confirmed quickly, and the daily interactions are relatively sweet. It is suitable for those who like fast-paced and sweet-cracking people. The author has a lot of words per chapter, great

Kaka's article, come on, be sure to write it down

It's good to read because of the big article. I don't know anything about football and only know three players. I met Kaká and fell into the trap. Now I search Bilibili all the time. When I was young, I was cute and handsome. Now I am gentle, elegant and handsome! It's very well written. I'm still reluctant to let it go after it's over. I hope I can see Kakawen again.

It's not bad, but the later stage basically focuses on the male protagonist, and the female protagonist's career line and the emotional line of the two are less described.

I feel the writing is very warm, a very warm feeling. I like [Shy], but I feel there are some problems with the character description. The heroine feels a bit tooly in the later stage.

I hope this Kaka can open his mouth, always hold back, always say yes, but cannot communicate well. After all, he and the heroine have been married for many years. I hope the heroine will not spoil him [crying] I hope Kaka can take the initiative and at least fight for his own opportunities. He just doesn't say anything and keeps training. He has to be kind to himself [almost crying]. He always tolerates it until he gets hurt [angry] It was actually the heroine who took the initiative to fight for it

It looks good and the progress is relatively fast. Looking forward to more updates. Recommend sweet love👩‍❤️‍👨

You can tell from between the lines that the author likes Kaka, but it's too quick ~ [awkward laugh]

Good-looking, good-looking hahahaha