A Curious Adventure in Wonderland?

Very good bs fanfic, it made me (airplane ears) (breathing) (jumping on the computer desk) (knocking over the water glass) (being frightened by knocking over the water glass) (jumping up and knocking over the mirror and TV) (breathing at the fallen water glass and mirror) (looking at Haji The person screams provocatively) (scratches the person with bloody marks) (slaps the claws to intimidate) (arches) (explodes hair) (threatens with breath) (pounces forward) (falls) (struggles to hip-hop) (breathes to the ground) (rolls) (bites the data cable) (vicious growl)

A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! They made it so that they had to give up the family party just to read the latest chapter (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this novel with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure!

The writing is very good. From "Little Red Riding Hood's Forest" to BS2, it is indeed one of the few good works among BS fans. I'm just a little curious as to what the protagonist's position is? The protagonist doesn't just go to Mary Sue's Grimm! If this is the case, will Alice 01 still like the protagonist?

Every time I write a book, I will give my work full marks, and then deduct points from it during repeated viewings and revisions, until it becomes useless in my mind, until I understand how to write a good story.

It's so good, but bs there are very few fanfics. It's rare to find a good one. I personally feel that this is one of the top bs fanfics I have seen so far. There is a plot that I really like. The part where the wolf, rabbit and bird come out at the beginning really feels like a fairy tale. Anyway, I think it's very good, I hope you won't stop updating it.

Personally, I think Tomato calls it the best book written by BS fans. I played BS2 in February this year and started reading novels six years ago. I am very picky about books as a 10-year-old. I think this book is quite good, but it may be because of the freshness of BS fans. However, as a book written by a new author, the flaws are not hidden and it has good potential. This book is only for insiders. People outside the circle will find this book very strange. The transition from the plot before Hongsen (I personally think the plot before Hongsen is pretty good) to Hongsen (I don't know why I feel that Hongsen wrote it in a hurry) has no foreshadowing at all. It's very abrupt and not very smooth. If outsiders read it, it will be very discouraging. Although there is an explanation later, some people are impatient and read the book based on their feelings, which is more discouraging for outsiders. For insiders, this is a five-star masterpiece, but for outsiders, what does this mean? How come this happened? What happens? What am I looking at? What was he talking about? Such a confused state (it's not that serious but can still be understood). Summary: This is a fan book for insiders. Its publicity and attraction to outsiders have not achieved good results. Finally, the circle of BS is relatively small. If it cannot attract the support of outsiders and close insiders, this book may not have particularly outstanding results, but the author, come on! The author is a new writer. This is the author's first book. The writing style is a bit inferior. The plot concept is not bad. It is already very good to be able to write it like this. The main reason is that the circle of BS is too small, which limits the achievements. For example, it is difficult for even a golden elixir monk to appear in the world of low martial arts. But the freshness brought by the small circle of BS is also one of the advantages.

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Please be sure to save them! I also wrote a little story. I absolutely disagree with the story she wrote down. Please, go save them. Use the souls of us "losers"! This is our salvation and our final atonement. It's all up to you!

My fists really want to drink blood. If I don't punch something for a day, I feel uncomfortable all over. I kill 10,000 enemies in my mind every day, and they pop up again after killing them. I can't finish them all, I can't finish them at all. Opponent? I left them all behind yesterday, and no one can beat them. I wash myself with sweat, pour myself with blood, and my bones are full of echoes of battle. I lose when I stand still - but that day will never come. The wound had just closed and opened again, just in time, a new exit. Fighting. Still fighting. Can't stop. Can't stop. Can't stop. I can easily knock out an adult African elephant with one punch. I usually engage in one-on-one combat training with 800kg giant brown bears. My bite force has reached a terrifying 1 million Newtons. Because I have been biting each other with Tyrannosaurus rex for a long time, my amazing bite force is enough to crush everything. I go to the national highway every day for collision training with Universiade heavy trucks. My body has been trained to the extreme. My flesh has been trained into steel. Want to compete with me? I advise you to give up this idea as soon as possible. Even if you use military force, you will not be able to kill me. My strength will always be above yours. I have restrained my desire to hunt all of you. If you dare to challenge my lower limit again, I don't mind letting my fists eat my heart today. You may be joking, but I really think so. When I was a child, I was a very honest student, and then a student in the same grade came to tease me. As a result, I threw him to the ground with a little force. Then I have always thought that if I punched with all my strength, I might seriously injure people, so you are just the prey I hunt.

How can I put it this way? It's one of the best books I've ever read so far. The fairy tale is very much like Andersen's style. The characters are well created and there's no OOC. The only drawback is that there are too few novels. Disadvantage... The disadvantage is that one chapter in one day is not enough [crying][crying][crying]