I Transmigrated to the Great Qin, and Ying Zheng Insists on Being My Dad

The overall story is smooth and readable. The biggest drawback is that the heroine has countless overlapping words in every sentence, which affects reading.

It's very beautiful. I saw someone in the comment section saying that the overlapping words affect reading, but in fact it doesn't. I read it completely and don't care about it at all. The logic is not confusing at all. The interaction between the heroine and the characters is heart-warming, especially the gift-giving part every time the heroine celebrates her birthday. Xin, the author's writing is very comprehensive, the heroine's thinking is clear, and there is no abuse. It is a small and enjoyable article. I finished it in one night, haha, but it feels like it ended too quickly, and there is a feeling that it is not finished. I hope there will be a little extra [top post]😳😳

Author, could you remove those refrains? It would be better if it was removed, please can you see this comment. [Top post][top post]

This book is really good!! First of all, the author will intersperse emojis in the text, which makes me feel that the historical figures in it are really alive, with flesh and blood, emotion and meaning. Secondly, the description of historical events is also very accurate and vivid. The picture is full of pictures and the description is delicate. It is remarkable. Furthermore, I feel that the characters are very carefully portrayed. Each character has his own unique personality and unique insights into things. Because Nian Nian traveled from modern times, it is easy for us to substitute for her. From the perspective of a three-year-old, these are not limited to words in books. These are not just histories in books, but living, life-like wars and smoke that are being experienced. This book is really meaningful. The books I have read so far are all written with great care. Recommended!!!!!!!!!!

The ideas are clear and the plot does not drag out. But the whole article is filled with chestnuts, all kinds of chestnuts, and eating chestnuts endlessly makes me feel like I'm going to get angry while reading it. It would be better if I write less about chestnuts.

Super pretty! ... But how come the subsequent plot flashes by? 🥺 It really feels like time has passed for thousands of years... It has a happy ending... I guess, I guess, there is always a feeling that it is still unfinished 🥺

This book is really well written. Although the ending feels a bit rushed and the timeline jumps a bit, it makes me feel a little unsatisfied after reading it to the end.

Only adults can say the repeated words. Children do not say the repeated words. When children are young, their speech is just unclear.

The flaws are not concealed, the author has already revised a lot of redundant words and punctuation, but why did it end suddenly 😢 I missed the eight years in between

Very nice, highly recommend!!!! 😳