The Commander's First Beauty in Five Generations Has Twins

It's okay. I followed more than 280 chapters in one go, but there are a few things I don't understand. 1. Why do I keep emphasizing that the heroine is too fat? Isn't it because she has a better figure, a curvier back, and plumpness? It's still a little bit consistent (but it's quite annoying to keep saying it). Those descriptions of fat women are very uncomfortable. A lot of the author's wording, especially in the first hundred chapters, is very strange, but it's a little better in the later chapters. 2. Regarding the creation of the male protagonist, the author wrote it very well when the male and female protagonists meet for the first time, and established the male protagonist immediately. However, the transition between the male and female protagonists when the male and female protagonists met for the second time was a bit too unnatural. I always felt that I missed several interactions between the male and female protagonists, but it got much better after the third meeting. 3. To avoid lightning for those who like to watch the male and female protagonists get along quickly. The male and female protagonists get along relatively rarely in the previous chapters. I remember it seems that it was more than 100 chapters before the male and female protagonists met for the second time. Let's talk about what feels better: 1. The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is quite interesting, especially the first meeting between the male and female protagonists. The writing is really good, step by step, and you can also see the personality charm of the male and female protagonists. 2. I really like the portrayal of the heroine. All actions are in line with behavioral logic. The character of the heroine is also very charming and not OOC at all. 3. The author has a good grasp of the development of the story. He tells what needs to be said. People who shouldn't appear are not allowed to appear casually. The supporting characters are also quite full. All in all, this novel is really good. It might be better if the author could change those incomprehensible words and thunderous language [Note]

I read it when I saw it was a new book on Chronology. I came here to comment. The heroine of this book currently gives me the impression that she is smart, decisive, and retributive. Sometimes she is sassy. For example, when the uncle wants to slap her, she cleverly avoids it and kicks the uncle away. Sometimes she is very cute. For example, when she just kicked the uncle away, the aunt stretched out her claws to scratch her face, and she happened to see her parents coming back from outside. They came with a white lotus➕green tea combination. She followed the action of the aunt to catch her. She fell back, sobbing and wiping away her tears, seeking death and survival. She learned the White Lotus skill from one of her enemies in her previous life, her cousin, to a 100% degree [face covering] [face covering] Although the family separation is very confusing, the plot content is very interesting. I have followed Chapter 42 and the author has worked hard to update it.

I feel like it's pretty good overall. Good: After rebirth, the heroine is resolute and resolute. She never accepts anger. She also separated from her uncle's family early. The target is not the brother with an injured face, but the leader of the group. I feel a little surprised. Bad: 1. The heroine in her previous life is really hard to describe. She makes me angry just thinking about it. Fortunately, she didn't feel angry after her rebirth. It's okay. 2. I can't bear to keep describing the psychology of that man Yao, can you reduce some of the scenes? 3. I keep saying that the heroine has a plump figure. What kind of image does she have? Some people always call her fat woman... It just feels a bit strange.

[Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] Looks good! Nice! Very nice! (It's just too little and I haven't read enough! Big update! Update! Update soon!) The chapter where the heroine becomes green tea 🍵➕️Little Bai Lian directly leaves cousin Bai Lian with no way out [laughing evilly] Our sister Baoer needs to have good looks and a good figure. Sisters who like rebirth, space, the 80s, and military marriage can go and watch it! [Understood]

Certified Bookworm of Tomato Book 100 Books a Year. The writing is one of the best and the pace is very fast. It's fun to be carried away~

It's so delicious! The heroine goes to practice with the army and meets a scumbag again. She even admits that she has been reborn [smile] [smile] Do you want to continue to entangle him? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I really like the heroine, she's smart, capable and has good skills! He is very smart and has top-notch suture and debridement techniques! Her figure and appearance are both outstanding, and she matches the male protagonist very well!

It looks good, but can the author give each chapter a name? @ I really wanted to see the moment when the scumbag realized the truth, and then I kept flipping through the pages one by one, and then I saw the yellow button [face covering] [face covering]

It looks good, please keep up the good work, author! It's exciting to watch the heroine develop her career [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] To be honest, the biggest attraction of this book is the conflict between the heroine and the vicious male protagonist, followed by the career, and the most boring thing is the relationship between the heroine and the heroine. I'm just waiting to see what happens to Lu Zhiyao now, skipping everything else. The author's writing style is actually good, but he still needs to learn how to write emotional lines. There is really no tension between the male and female protagonists. It is neither vigorous nor letting the flow take its course, but more like finding someone to make do with. It's okay if it's a personal story record of the heroine, but it's not too off-putting if it's a romance novel.

It looks good, but why is there no title after chapter 82? . . .