Warhammer: Oh No, I've Become the Empire's Second Biggest Deadweight

This book tells the story of the wolf group that has always been synonymous with barbarians in Warhammer. Some people may feel that it is too slow to warm up, and it is not too operatic. But how can I put it, I quite like this feeling, and the writing is very delicate. I like this kind of bond and blending of the feelings and connections between people, especially the original body, which is obviously different in power, but the real feelings can also be conveyed. Moreover, the author's writing has the feeling of a snowy field, the smell of ice particles and the feeling of cold wind blowing on the face. When the emperor comes, I am really looking forward to what he will go through when he becomes a can, but it is also very sad. Therefore, I also think that in the early stage of survival in the wilderness, it is good for everyone to gather around the fire and eat meat. After all, tens of thousands of years of suffering are still waiting for these wolf cubs, and to be honest, I have also read a lot of Warhammer fan fiction. The wild wolves really have a good background no matter how you say it, so I am quite happy to have such a book dedicated to writing their stories. I hope the author can stick to it, come on•͈ᴗ⁃͈ ✧I like your writing style, and I also like the growth model of the protagonist. It is not about being unparalleled, but using human growth and strength to fight against the terrible world of Warhammer. I also wish the protagonist not to forget where he came from. I believe that the peaceful era has taught you many precious things. Please pass on even a little bit of the happiness we feel now to Warhammer. Come on, author!

The early stage was pretty good. It deepened my understanding of the "simple" folk customs of Fenris and the ubiquitous dried fish. I also saw the wild life of the Wolf King in his infancy.

It looks okay so far, and I look forward to the continuation of the story. I don't know if the author used AI to write it. There are always some recurring descriptions and inexplicable short sentences, which seem a bit strange. However, there are some parts in the later text that don't look like AI. I don't know if the outline was given to AI to polish it. I hope I can check it or make some modifications myself to correct the above problems [eating melon] And Russ, I personally don't think Russ doesn't understand the tactics mentioned at the beginning of the article, because it's a relatively simple way to lure enemies. Russ should also have this kind of tactics when hunting, so I don't think he doesn't understand. I personally think that the description of Ruth can be slightly reduced, or is it that Ruth simply doesn't want to use his brain right now, so he lets these things pass through the surface of his brain [face covering], this is just a personal opinion I'm still looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope it will be updated soon, with more and more updates. I don't know when it will be until I write the introduction [laughing] After more than 30 chapters, the AI flavor is no longer so strong, and I may have polished it myself later. But the setting is quite confusing, and the description of Russ is more like a highly intelligent business machine wolf boy, rather than like the original body. The original body has extremely strong learning and understanding abilities, but it is not shown in the book. At the beginning, it was written that Ruth looks like silver hair. You are the first one among the many fanfics I have seen that writes that Ruth has silver hair [facepalm]. The same goes for Bjorn, who was originally a Terran, but that was changed in the book. Kaul was even a little apprentice in 30k. These settings are small things, but stacked together they make me look weird. More importantly, the writing is so-so, so keep writing.

The author wrote about Fenris and his feelings about Fenris. He not only wrote about the protagonist, but also about the growth of Russ. The bond between the boy and the Wolf King gradually deepened. The plot is also okay. The introduction says it's a big deal. In the plot, Ruth doesn't really rely on Ruth to kill him. The protagonist has the ability to stand by Ruth's side. [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to the author's continued updates!

Thoughts after viewing: Frozen fish 😋 It's not that the AI writing style is good, the content is good, the subject matter is novel, there are no faults, and it's beautiful, it's just that the cover doesn't seem to arouse much interest.

Highly recommended, there are few fanfics about Ruth on the entire Internet, this one is great [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It doesn't matter if I haven't read Warhammer yet. I'm still playing the Fenris dungeon. The male protagonist doesn't have any particular problems. The current strength is very reasonable. Every character is written with flesh and blood. Those who support the author should follow up and update the book. Don't let the book die [I'm about to cry]

Damn me, I found a Warhammer fanfic that can be used as a god in Tomato in the future. This book is really well written and very delicate. It also has the ruggedness of Fenris and the hidden ancient wisdom of survival. I just blew it.

They are all so cute (*ෆ´˘`ෆ*)♡! ! Especially the interaction with Ruth! ! !

It's very interesting, and the golden finger is not too big. I hope to continue to update it.

Very good. It's the first time I've read a Wolf King Warhammer fanfic.