Harry Potter: A Marauders-Era Observation Journal

The writing is delicate, the emotions tend to be slow-burning, and the plot tends to be healing. There is no suspicion or quarrel or estrangement here. There is only pure goodwill, stable companionship, and slowly warming feelings. The warmth of young people is written in a flowing writing style. So far, I haven't seen any bad points. On the contrary, I still like this book. I think I will come back to review it later. [Blow a kiss] Thank you to my wife for writing the story of her family members in a long and smooth writing style. I hope this article is free of sadness and regret. I wish the author good luck in writing and the article will be popular.

Very great, great, great! I feel that his emotions are relatively delicate, and his relationship with Remus is probably a kind of long-term relationship, where a man is in love and a woman is interested. His timeline moves relatively quickly, but he will have no shortage of plot points. But his plot is not particularly fast or slow, so it won't make you tired when reading. Then I feel that his character image is actually relatively full and not very single. (I'm not very good at writing book reviews, so please click in and take a look at the book. Really, if you don't think it's good, it's still too late to quit [sending my heart]) I think the author's divination is very interesting, [laughs] It makes me want to draw a few cards. Then the author God came. When I was reading, I kept adding bookmarks and underlining them. There were so many good sentences and paragraphs that I didn't know how to praise them enough. And I couldn't stop reading it. I might give up on other books or skip reading them, but this one was not boring at all. The love between two people is actually in the tiny details, I was so sweet. The author is a big fan of generating electricity for love, please keep writing [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It is relatively slow to develop, but the writing is very good, the writing style is very good, and it is still being serialized. The emotional pull with Remus is long and flowing, light, and the description is very good. One of the few Remus stories, recommended!

It's a bit slow, the writing is pretty good, it's a rare cp Remus, I hope it can be sweeter (but the cp line hasn't officially entered the ambiguous period yet, someone's friendship line seems to be starting to worry...

The writing is good, the emotional line is slow but very warm, and the relationship with the predator is very good, which resolves the conflict between the Evans sisters.

I especially want to ask the author if he uses AI to polish the article. I feel that the more I read it, the more it looks like AI, but there is really no malicious intent (you can tell from my rating). I have read Chapter 32 so far. I went back to the first few chapters of the book to comment. I thought the writing style at that time was very interesting. I thought the inner drama of the heroine from the first perspective was very cute. I don't know why the parts I have read so far always feel dry and different from the previous ones. But I'm not saying that this is definitely AI, and I'm not qualified to identify it. These are some of my personal opinions. If you have any friends who are more concerned, you can sort it out on your own. However, I read the first few chapters very well. It changed the relationship between Lily and Petunia, changed the tragedy of Snape's mother Irene, and made Snape not only a good friend of Lily. When writing, the author did not describe Snape as being particularly vicious and indifferent like some articles, only caring about the heroine Lily blindly tolerating this kind of plot. I think it was very reasonable for Snape to agree to treat the heroine as a friend during the time they met, and he would not write the character awkwardly to establish a "Lily is the poisonous only" persona.

The writing is good, the emotional description is quite delicate, and it's an immersive time travel.

It's so beautiful! ! ! The fanfic between the heroine and Remus gives me a very warm feeling~[laughing][shy]

Beautiful and warm