I’m in the Dormitory Building, and You’re Telling Me This Is Rhodes Island?

Leave one star and see how it goes. The idea of ​​this novel is quite bold. Group portrait writing is a test of the author's skill, otherwise it would feel like writing in a dream. However, except for some logical problems (such as a seven-hour door that looks like 24 hours), it seems that it is generally okay. Before completing the first time-travel point, the novel felt a bit awkward (the cuts in and out were too hasty, but I guess it was to prepare for the second time-travel point), but after entering daily life and explaining the background of the novel, the writing power can be said to be significantly improved. Currently, I'm in Dragon Clan. Because I haven't watched Dragon Clan, my [thinking] is somewhat vague and I can't comment on whether it's good or bad. I hope the author can keep writing [heartfelt] This book is regrettable [grieving]

It's unexpectedly good. I've read too many Arknights novels with only one protagonist, and I suddenly found this novel very interesting. Believe me, the author's writing is very interesting. I would say the most interesting part is the daily life, and the main plot is also well written.

This book is very novel. It is the first time I have seen this subject. The author writes it very well! Some time ago, I was so moved by the little animation after finishing the main plot. When I saw the author's story about Kelsey, I thought of it again. This book is really good. I highly recommend it [Like] [Like] [Like]

How should I put it, this kind of infinite flow of group portraits, you must read more. If you don't read more, you won't be able to tell whether it is good or bad. I can only say that you can still read it now, which is to make up for the regret. Finally, I want to say that this book is amazing, and the author who can write this book is also a god.

I don't know why, but it feels very depressing to me, but it's quite interesting and the subject matter is very novel.

WC Niubi, please tell me the author's thoughts. It should be that the time traveler in the dormitory traveled to Terra and replaced the original character, and then directly transformed the original Terra into the Lost Belt in F Go. The original characters in Rhode Island (those characters when playing the game) appear in the white space. In the end, only one time traveler, Lucille, went to find the doctor and asked him to lead Rhodes Island to solve the Lost Belt. I have to say that the author's development is quite unexpected.

The group portraits are good-looking and the writing is also very delicate, but I feel that the growth of each character is written too fast. I think it is better to intersperse daily life and growth [Thinking] Overall, it is good, not bad [Like] [Like] [Like]

I hope the author will continue to write well. The daily writing is very good, and the main plot is also good. I just don't know if there is a main plot.

The author should be the reincarnation of Lao Deng. You can tell by looking at his introduction. The basic skills of writing are very solid. The plot and setting are very interesting. I am looking forward to the subsequent development. Moreover, it is not a rough and inferior multi-person novel. It is more like a group portrait novel. However, I feel that there is a slight sense of melancholy in daily life, and there are some redundancies and cumbersomeness. Simply put, the emotional drama is a bit too much. I hope it can be streamlined a little bit.

This book is really great. The author's setting is very attractive. The protagonists (well, there are quite a lot of them anyway.) They do not have souls traveling into the bodies of Arknights operators, but they and the Arknights operators share their own bodies. They will experience what the operators have experienced (dreams), but they still retain their own consciousness. It feels very novel. This book is really great, I will repeat it again! ! !