A Fight for the Throne? I'm Not Favored, but I Have a Shopping System

The idea is good, but the imagination is too small. Three-time fidelity, buy some conceptual things, take off once, use reality as the benchmark, go to the two-dimensional store to customize and buy, you can definitely get three golden fingers

Five-star praise! The writing and pacing look very good, the plot is very attractive, and the characters are well created. The complete world view has not yet been fully developed. I look forward to the author writing about the world in the future. I hope to create a magnificent and boundless world pattern. The grand settings of multiple worlds, the secret realm of all races, and the chaotic star sea will be shown more, which will fill the epic feeling. I will keep following the updates!

It's so well written that I can't stop following it! Just tell me some of my thoughts. In the part about giving the glass, I hope I can write down the completely different reactions of Concubine De, the eldest brother's wife, and Guo Jia when they received the gift, and also write down the opinions of the people next to me. In the plot where the eldest brother goes on an expedition, we can not only focus on the perspective of the protagonist, but also write more about what the accompanying soldiers and people along the road saw and heard, so that the story on the road can be richer. There is also the story about the old man who was injured by the mission. I have always been curious about whether the five taels of silver were given to the old man. If I could write about how the old man's family life improved after he got the money, the plot would be more grounded. In addition, the three girls who lived in Zhuangzi before, how did they talk about this experience with their families when they returned home? I hope their perspectives are fuller.

It can be seen that the author pays more attention to logical details. I've read about a hundred chapters so far and there's nothing bad about it. In particular, the character description of Guo Jia can also depict the demeanor of a wise man, and then the character is set to the border in a timely manner. It avoids the collapse of the character due to the author's own intellectual limitations. This is relatively rare and successful in tomatoes.

It's interesting, but sometimes it feels like playing house. There is no particularly tense description of seizing the heir.

There are some bad points in the front, but I think it's okay. The nine sons seizing the direct descendants are still interesting, but after the three girls came out, they started to favor female channels. After I started writing poems in Chapter 160, I got out of hand. Later, I started to write poems, copy poems, copy poems, copy poems, copy poems, and copy poems. I feel like I'm running out of fresh ideas, but seeing as it's pretty good in the early stages, I'd still give it five-star support.

It's very interesting. I hope there will be more updates every day.

The setting is still novel, but there are many places where there are no restrictions. There is no problem in reading it without thinking. The skills are directly disclosed. The more powerful the skills are, the easier they are to practice. There are several more masters, and the women are quite inexplicable.

It's very well written, and the author works hard.

The rhythm is still relatively smooth. It is currently a low-level world of martial arts. The combat power at the beginning has reached the bottom of the top level. The fidelity at the beginning is not that crazy. In order to balance the combat power and prevent it from collapsing, according to some ideas in the comment area, the whole spells and magical medicines will collapse sooner or later. However, the handling of this fidelity is indeed not appropriate. It can be limited to martial arts or modern products, and the span will not be so large. Overall, the force is sufficient. The style is stable. The most important thing is that the system serves the plot and there is no abuse of the system.