After My Adopted Sister Cultivated Immortality, She Came Back to Steal My Bride

I took a small look at a few pictures, they are okay, pretty good, these memories explain a lot Looking back, the protagonist's life was in vain and he was speechless.

When does the heroine steal a bride? What are you writing about? I haven't written about the female protagonist cultivating immortality. I came here because of the title. It turns out that you are over 50 and haven't written about the female protagonist cultivating immortality. Please change your name.

Very good, very stimulating [thinking] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] If the author plans to write a long book, this book will be very good, but if it is less than 500,000 words, a lot of content will be lost. The story before becoming an immortal is so interesting that I can't even imagine how much more I could write after marrying. The author must persist, and a good story must be savored slowly. [Thinking][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly]

Yes, pure love ennnnn is very pure. The author knows how to write. I was in tears from the beginning to the end. You know, I am a thousand-year-old bandage. I kept grinning the whole time [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. It's very beautiful.

The writing is good, and it fits my imagination of picking up a younger sister and bringing her back to be raised. At first, she was just a family member, but later she was used to strengthen her body (bushi). It's not toxic at all. If I have to say it, the male protagonist now only has the talent to practice martial arts but no spiritual roots. He and his sister may have immortality, which is a foreshadowing of the lifespan theory (Brother Han, can you really become an immortal without spiritual roots?), But the plot has just begun anyway, so I believe the author.

For now, the pace is okay. Although most people read it for the scene where the sister returns from cultivating immortality, the rhythm of explaining the causes and consequences is also okay. However, this type of book focuses on writing about the daily life of two people. If the author writes later after the sister goes to cultivate immortality, the time between the two people will be separated. If it is too long, if it is developed separately, there is a high probability that the book will be dull, because I have read this type a lot, and the daily writing is very good at the beginning, but later it is separated for the purpose of upgrading, and the length is too long, so it will become dull in an instant. Here Tomato talks about fast pace, and it depends on how the author grasps the rhythm in the middle.

Hiss~ I feel that some of the plot advancement is taken for granted. For example, when I met Liu Qingshuang for the second time, I didn't consider whether the name was the same in such a large area. Although I understood that the plot should be advanced, it was still quite uncomfortable logically. He also has a physique that is rare in a hundred years and a rare one in ten thousand years. Isn't it easy to leave a mortal in the sect? I should be thankful to God if I can join their sect. [I feel wronged] My sister didn't even consider this possibility. The same goes for saying goodbye when entering the sect, which feels a bit casual. But the interaction with my sister is quite interesting.

It's a very interesting book, with an emotional development process and an emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is a bit gravity-defying, but essentially possessive in love. It's a fresh and refreshing love novel, worth reading [Like][Like][Like]

Not smelly, a delicious lump of "Dafen" [thoughts] I like to watch this kind of thing, half redemptive, half yandere, half dependent, "brother and sister love" [laughing] I don't have much strength, but it feels delicious [licking screen] The structure is neat and organized, the content and details are fully described but not excessive, with just a hint of curiosity [learned] I'm still a "worm egg" now, and I finally found something more delicious [get it] Don't just trust some people who have a rating of 9 or more. You can look for more negative reviews to see what you can't accept. Screen them in advance, but screen out the bad reviews. Although I only see a 7.1 Rating now, I hope he can get better and appear in more people's eyes. The author will update soon [please update] Come on! [Full] [full] [full] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [fear] [fear] [fear]

Good? How to describe it? If you use expressions to describe the novel, it might be like this: [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] But if it's not very acceptable, it's probably like this [what] [awkward laugh] [stare] [petrified] [like]