A Crybaby Everyone Loves, Hounded by a Mad Villain

The heroine is quite cute, and the plot is pretty good, but I feel that most of the descriptions are a bit lacking. For example, I saw a lot of descriptions like "exudes... An aura" and "looks like...". I hope it can be improved a lot. Well, you see what I hate... I don't really like other females in Dada's novels. It is assumed that the male protagonist approaches the female protagonist in order to use her as a springboard to pursue another person. It is enough to write this once. I am a little tired of emphasizing it many times... And the system is a bit annoying. The other articles are so good that I can't bear to give them up. I hope they can be improved. I changed it a lot later and the writing is pretty good.

It's quite good-looking, the heroine is very cute, but the heroine's highlights are too little (almost none). No matter how ordinary it is, it's not like this. You can write about the heroine's progress instead of just making the heroine rely on the male protagonists. Is the protagonist of this book a female protagonist or a male protagonist? I keep emphasizing that the female protagonist is dusty. Once or twice is okay, but emphasizing all the time is too much. 🙂 The highlight inside is all about the male protagonists. Especially the original female protagonist, who is also one of the male protagonists. When it comes to the male protagonist, he is all kinds of awesome and popular, while the female protagonist is described as gray and gloomy as a mouse. The author is definitely the hero's biological mother and the heroine's stepmother. But the good thing is that there is no female competition in it, and the female characters in it are all friendly.

By the way, what does this system do? It's so weird.

Don't give up, author! The heroine is so cute! She is beautiful and charming in the non-traditional sense, very kind, brave, pure, simple and cute. The heroine created by these personality charms completely fits the role of the groundhog! She is really cute! Please don't give up...

Five Stars was defeated by the system

Others are okay, but I hate the system and the wolf leader, so I can only give it 4 points. I typed it wrong, it was 4 stars.

The heroine is so cute₍ᵔ･•･ᵔ₎ She especially likes the heroine and the original heroine. Qingqing, you must be the main palace! ! !

Everything except the system

Ah, the sweet and soft heroine. Want to kiss so much

Beautiful, the heroine is very cute!