One Person Watches: From the Start, the Battle of Mianshan Plays!

Very good, it borrows the dual-narrative structure from another book. But to be honest, the characters' reactions are still too few. Bao'er doesn't react much in this book. It's just that she's already like that, and it doesn't involve her own secrets, so she won't see it, and others won't see it either. The problem is that the king doesn't react much either.

It's great! It starts by introducing the Tang Sect, which I really appreciate. Many books that introduce the Tang Sect from the beginning start with Zhang Chulan, and then they either fizzle out or stop updating before even getting to the Tang Sect arc. Finally, I've found one that starts right from the Tang Sect!

Overall, it's a fairly smooth story. The writing style is old-fashioned but still quite standard. While there aren't many climaxes, there aren't any major flaws either. It's a fairly standard story that's worth reading.

Actually, let's discuss this: wasn't Tian Xiaodie's death truly justified? And does anyone really think their sworn brotherhood was right? Wu Gengsheng said that it would have been fine if the sworn brother wasn't the leader of Quanxing Sect but Feng Yao; does anyone really think that's acceptable?

Author, your updates are too slow! There are 24 hours in a day. I'm not greedy, but asking you to type for 8 hours isn't unreasonable. The average person's typing speed is 30-60 words per minute. Let's take that range of 45 words. That's 2700 words per hour. The author needs to think. So let's say you type 2000 words per hour.

This is a very pure narrative style, unlike the kind where other main characters are used to expose the plot. This is much better... The pacing of the chapters is excellent, the characters' performances are appropriate, and the arrangement of the selected chapters is also good. It's considered excellent among Tomato's narrative styles.

After reading it, all I can say is that it was totally my cup of tea! Movie reviews with a main character are cliché; I rarely see novels like this without one. This is the true essence of a movie review. The satisfying movie-watching experience had me spinning! 🤤 The pacing was excellent, delivering the authentic reaction I was looking for. So good! Author, please update more!

This is my second viewing. The advantage is that there is no messy transitional involvement of the main character. The movie review is relatively well restored and the content is relatively positive. The disadvantage is that the new generation and the older generation have less reaction after watching the movie.

Overall, it's alright. However, there are a few mechanical moments in the writing, which is understandable. I still encourage the author to continue writing. It's just that there are occasional traces of AI editing. If the author uses AI, I suggest using it less. Some sentences are also a little awkward. Of course, I'm not criticizing, just reminding you. You can ignore this if you like. Thank you! 💕

It was alright. The overall review was well-organized and the pacing was good, but personally, I felt a little unsatisfied. I still prefer review shows with a main character who gets a reward.