I Brought Modern Civilization to the Cultivation World

It's very exciting. I came from short plays. The plot is very novel and there is nothing toxic about it for me so far. This is how we travel to the end of the world and to the world of immortality. This time, a person from the world of immortality came to modern times. It is a very good story to develop the world of immortality. The author will update more.

It's a very novel novel. The setting of the world of immortality traveling back to the earth is very powerful. The high-level IQs are online. They can accurately identify the protagonist as coming from another world based on just a few antiques he brought out. Then based on the information leaked around the protagonist, it is determined that the world of immortality is from the world of immortality. The world of immortality has also dismantled the technological and cultural system from the earth, and pulled mortals towards modernization. Then there are various mutual tests between the high-level officials of the sect and the high-level officials of the earth.

It's okay and pretty good to watch. Personally, I like to see people from different eras and different worlds reducing each other's dimensions and attacking each other. ① There are too many and too frequent male posts about men, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable as a girl. At first, I thought it was just that the protagonist had never seen a woman wearing modern clothing, but later on, basically every female character who appeared would have a detailed description of her appearance. Now that I have read more than 100 chapters, there are no female characters appearing later, so there is no description of this aspect. ② A large number of paragraphs and language are frequently used repetitively. Some will change the shell, and many will not even change the shell. When reading such repetitive passages, there will be an unknown fire. ③ The logic is quite rigorous, but the small details are rough and there are many loopholes. Modify rating.

The theme is novel, the plot is also very good, and it also shows that the combat power of the immortal world is not very strong, it is relatively low-level, so that it is on par with modern combat power. The only shortcoming is,,, I will use the most straightforward, simplest and least roundabout words to put it, that is, the quantity is too small.

Not bad, not bad. I have seen so much about technology and immortality. This perspective is really good. I traveled to the present and secretly sent technology and knowledge to the sect. Hahahaha. I have read seventy or eighty chapters so far. The characters have grown and the plot is also good. I have read the latest chapter, and I feel that the author will not take sides. The two worlds are competing against each other, fearing each other's calculations, and overall they are moving in the direction of progress together. My Mach 50 hydrogen bomb makes a right-angle turn and combines virtual and real special effects live broadcast to shock the Blue Star internally and frighten the world of immortality externally.

Very well written. There is no such thing as cooperating with the national team right from the start. Always obscene. Very good The only problem is the slow updates.

The writing style in the first 30 chapters is immature and procrastinating, and it feels a bit like ancient urban writing. It wastes a lot of words on the insignificant appearance of women. There are some social rules and humanities that I lack experience in writing, but the overall shortcomings are not hidden, the plot is advanced reasonably and the three perspectives are normal. Later, the bronze medal is reported to the national team, which speeds up the plot. It obviously feels much more enjoyable to read. Good work

The writing is really awesome. Starting from the game between the two worlds in the last 100 chapters, there is no peeing throughout the whole process. Unlike other works, the protagonist of this book is just an "introduction". The real protagonist is the two-way game between the earth and the world of immortality. The current score of 8.1 Is really too low. In my opinion, this book can reach at least 9.3.

A super interesting idea. Although the idea is big, it is not suspended. The logic is rigorous and online, and the idea can be implemented in reality. Sometimes it is easy to turn into an academic report for the sake of rigor, but this article is okay so far, and it does not feel boring. I don't give it five stars because I'm afraid I'm expecting too much. After all, it's not over yet. Hope it can be perfect and better

Just for your subject matter and your imagination, I have to give you five stars [laughing]. Although it has an AI feel, it is not bad. The text description has a sense of pictures and a sense of substitution. No drama. Come on, author