Type-Moon: From the Start, It's the Fourth Holy Grail War, but I'm a Fairy

I hope the author can make some of the protagonists more rational and not have to worship and respect Saber so much. I hope it can be weakened appropriately. After all, the protagonist is a cherubim and has to be a bit strong. But overall it is very interesting and the plot is very innovative. It makes people excited and looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the author can work hard to continue writing.

It should be that Al has been used in some places. Al's words always say: not... Not... But, but it's okay. Well, the main problem is still Al. The author can actually change the description of this kind of AI a little bit. The main thing is what is not... Not... But, what is subtle and what is difficult to observe without looking carefully, such as frowning, smiling, etc. A small amount is okay, but most of the AI uses these descriptions. If it is like this, it will be weird even if it is not seen with AI.

It's not that unbearable, but there are indeed some problems The protagonist can only be said to be the protagonist. There is no question of who the protagonist is. It is more like gaining the ability of an angel and rationalizing it on the basis of Yue. It is not a complete acting genre, and the role of Date Live is not easy to play in the first place. You can do it for fun when you don't have a book to read. At least there's nothing wrong with it in terms of perspective. It's probably three to four stars. If you can read it, this book can be considered mediocre. It's not that bad, and it's not that good either. Those who rated 1 or 2 stars are too subjective and the big portions are not enough. In fact, this book can still be used for entertainment. It is probably better than the previous one but not as good as the previous one. The author said that it will be refined in the latest, so please wait for a while. After reading the refined review, I will update the review in real time. After taking a look at the revised content, I have a reasonable explanation and have alleviated some poisonous points, but it is indeed not up to five stars. However, four stars are definitely there now. I hope the author can continue to work hard. The current momentum is very good. As long as the updates are not interrupted, he will definitely be able to create a masterpiece. From the current point of view, I still hope that the protagonist can have some mental growth. Although according to the novel, the protagonist has only traveled for 3 or 4 days. It is normal to have strong power and float easily. With this power, I float better than the protagonist. The main thing is to remind the author. After all, the protagonist's mentality, or the perspective from the protagonist's side, is indeed a little bit toxic in the early stage, but this is also a normal phenomenon. Overall, this book has a promising future. I will update the rating from time to time. I hope the author will work hard. New in 9.5 Speaking of the author, what is your current judgment on the protagonist's character? ⊙_⊙ But if you ask me to say it, I feel that the protagonist is still drifting in the wind, with no fixed point, and is completely outside the whole story. He will not get angry when encountering cruel things, and will not laugh when encountering happy things. If he insists on being round, the evaluation he can give is that the lamb of the Lord is pure and flawless, so he can obtain the vest of an angel. I suggest that the top priority is to mobilize the protagonist's character and emotions The creativity of this book is quite excellent, which cannot be denied. I actually think the reworked section is pretty good. I feel that the section where you meet Du Mao is the most emotional section for the protagonist. It may be because after that section was criticized, the author began to avoid this form of expression. However, if you continue to write according to the character of the protagonist in that section, there will be no problem. You can round it out by considering that the protagonist is a deep CG controller. In this way, the current image of the protagonist can be rounded out. It is said that it is to collect CG without ruining the plot. If the author insists on continuing with the current character, the best advice I can give is to write the story from someone else's perspective, that is, insert the protagonist, but the perspective is the second-person perspective of others in the story. This can at least change the protagonist's somewhat empty image. Now the protagonist does not even have the image of A Zhai. In terms of plot description, because the protagonist is now set to be invincible in terms of strength, it doesn't matter if there is less fighting or something like that. The depiction of daily life is more important than the depiction of combat power in battle. I hope the author can add more daily life. It is basically the main line now. Newly added in 9.13 The recent updates have given me a lot of surprises. The author has made great progress. Not only the character and character of the protagonist have become more three-dimensional, but the descriptions of daily life and big scenes are also really delicious. The writing style has also improved day by day. The protagonist and the author have made progress together. This kind of scene is really a blessing! ! ! The only thing I'm worried about now is that the scene is too big and can no longer be stopped at will. If you are not careful, it will be mishandled and cause controversy. For example, I saw many people in the comment area saying that Joan of Arc should be burned. However, I believe that the author must have thought about how the story will develop in the future. I hope that this beautiful story can continue forever. As a witness, I will be extremely happy [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]

The front is a little dull, but the rhythm in the back is very good. Starting from the left and right of Alexander's exit, the whole thing becomes much more compact, and we can also see the serious battle between Kenneth and Kiritsugu. This time Diarmuid also accomplished what he always wanted to do. He left the duel with dignity and loyalty to the master. It was a dream come true. After watching a lot, I really wanted to see a good ending for Kenneth's group. Brother Flash is still a bit humorous, not developed enough, and may not be one of the main characters in terms of status, so I plan to retire it quickly. After a quick glance, the rating is so low, I guess I didn't wait until later. Give a five-star encouragement score to balance it out. If you have time later, you can revise the previous article, which will be even more perfect. Looking forward to the arrangement of the final battle and the ending of these characters who are still alive.

After changing it, I was finally able to watch [face covering]. Although it still has a strong AI flavor, at least it's not that poisonous.

I feel like you must do a few things when writing about the author of Xingyue. The three kings must participate and blow saber and save Sakura. From what I have seen, all Xingyue novels are like this. Do you have any templates? Post them and see [what] And I think the protagonist's character is too plain. When I read novels, I don't look at myself in the mirror. When writing novels, don't make the protagonist's character look like a real worker [face covering]

The protagonist is just Liya's licking dog

Yes, the plot is very reasonable. The character descriptions are also very good. The plot is also very interesting to watch. I don't know why, but I feel a sense of AI when I read it occasionally. It should be a question of my own experience. But overall it's a work worth watching.

The FZ line is average, the ultimate king chef, the kind who can't walk even when seeing Saber, this chapter has 2-3 stars. FGO Fuyuki's uniqueness is okay and a little clever, but the portrayal of Manyuri is still quite satisfactory and average. FA line, the one with the best sense at present, a chapter that better combines the world view of the battle and Xingyue. However, it depends on the follow-up. After all, this chapter has not been completed yet, but the current portrayal of Xiaoliu is better than the previous portrayal of Wan Yuri. Overall, I can give it four stars and keep up the good work [plus one for bookshelf]

It looks good, and generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the flaws. Speaking of which, will there be a follow-up to the fourth game? Does the author have any ideas to write a follow-up to the four battles in this timeline? For example, Dongmu's Great Holy Grail was stolen by America, and he fought a strange forgery of the Holy Grail War in North America. Then the protagonist, as an angel in human form, was entrusted by the church to be a referee, and he severely punished the Dead Apostle. It happened that there were many super-standard servants in that game, and it was a hearty mythical battle [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]