Choose My Golden Finger from the Start: I Pick the Twelve Talismans

The writing is decent, and it shows your own ideas. It started strong and continued to grow, although I know it won't last long before it fizzles out. But it does offer new concepts and ideas. You've already forged your own path without copying others.

The idea is good, and the unconventional plot is very engaging. The author has ideas, but perhaps because they've read a lot, they don't know how to write them, thus wasting these good ideas. I recommend that new authors use AI to express their ideas. Online novels aren't literary works; the most attractive thing is the plot, and writing style is just a tool for expression. I hope the author will consider this. 👀

Sure, this book is quite exciting. The protagonist lives a different life, going from being fed by fate to earning his own living. It explores various rules and their application...

Immortal Emperor: Returning to the starting village at max level only to be utterly defeated by random players?

Five stars! It brought back memories of reading Blue & White Society magazine back in the day. The author writes really well.

Even without reading it, I knew the main character would disappear later on.

You know what, the current setting is quite clever. The only problem is how to write the game. The protagonist is practically invincible from the start, and with the appearance of the counterpart, I wonder if things will turn out badly. If they keep pushing, it might become a hit.

Referring to the universe as chaos here is somewhat inappropriate. Aside from chaotic gods and demons, even Great Immortals cannot remain in chaos for long; the universe should be like a bubble, constantly arising and ceasing within it. Only sages can transcend this cosmic bubble.

This is a novel idea in the genre of invincible protagonist stories, and novel ideas should be encouraged. However, this book lacks substantial content and feels like self-indulgent entertainment. Keep it up, and I look forward to your future books.

The premise is good. However, because your premise is too ambitious, it's destined to be limited in scope. To go further, you'd have to divide it into episodic series or short films. Ultimately, it depends on how you want to write it.