The Ninth Witch of Teyvat

It's quite good-looking, but the bad point is that the pace is relatively fast, and the main plot feels like it goes by very quickly. The legendary missions also end directly in one or two chapters, which is very fast. Then there is another point where the protagonist's participation rate is a bit low and he does not appear in front of the players very much. Then the plot avoids the past and omits part of the plot, which results in a significant reduction in chapters and makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. So I suggest the author to write it in as much detail as possible and try to include the protagonist. And because Shadow and Sora account for the majority of the plot, the participation rate of the protagonist is only about 25%, which is enough.

For those who are new to this book, let me tell you something. From I don't know how many pictures, the name of the traveler will be blank for a while, and it will be a screen for another time. There is also a forward-looking image in it, but it is not marked (the cut-scene uses the male protagonist, officially, and after the version is online, the male protagonist still uses the male protagonist, but then a female protagonist appears. The male and female protagonist here is the traveler) The awkwardness of live broadcast complaints, the writing style feels a bit like a middle school student But if you watch it, it's okay. You can watch it after losing your mind, otherwise it will take a lot of time to think about it (especially those who play Genshin Impact) The most important point is that the main character in this book, the anchor of the player on the screen, is very European, has a stable mentality, and is the kind of person who always pulls out the best every time. And the most important thing is that no matter how you try to be the author, the author just doesn't come out to reply to comments or likes, it means that you have finished posting, and after this (two or three per day), you will be offline.

It's still very interesting, but the pace is too fast. I suggest the author to write more slowly, otherwise he won't be able to finish the story later.

The writing is very good, but a little too fast. The main plot of Mondstadt is too small and I can't finish it in 4 chapters. I can extend it a little bit.

Worth recommending! Please continue to work hard and update!

Okay, it seems to suit my taste.

The pace is faster and many details are omitted, but overall it's good.

It's okay so far, but the writing is a bit immature, and the expression is basically the (original) plot with some of my own ideas added. Not much has changed. Just wide enough to see it [laughs]

@The author, could you please tell me when Nico will appear?

It's good to read. It's good to read. There's been a book shortage recently. I thought I'd run out of books to read. I didn't expect to find this one. Please update me. Thank you, the author.