My White Moonlight Went Abroad, He Didn’t Die

Author, I really, really, really like your writing style and the characters in your writing. Bai Yueguang is shown vividly in your writing. I don't look down on the substitute because of Bai Yueguang. The real author, I don't read your articles every day. I feel anxious, author. I will always support you, come on, come on^ω^, I believe you are the best! I hope I can update more every day. My biggest hobby every day is to read the author's articles and wait for updates at any time. People may have many ideals. I don't know how lofty my ideals will be, but for now I only know that I want to read the author's articles [Adoration]

It's good-looking, but actually many people would mind writing a subtitle for an article marked as a heartthrob (although they may not end up together in the end, but it's still considered a kind of deception) In fact, I also mind that the heartthrob has a secondary CP, which takes away the attention of the protagonist. What I understand as the heartthrob is that everyone loves him and everyone's eyes are on him. In fact, this is possible because everything is written generously. Sometimes the description can indeed reveal the charm of the protagonist. Sometimes I feel uncomfortable because I feel like the main character in this book doesn't get as much of a role as the supporting characters [laughs] If you are a fan of heartthrobs who don't have a great CP and a little bit of group portraits, you can try reading this book, because this is the case for me and I can read it, so please give the author a boost.

The writing is a bit immature, and sometimes it doesn't look very smooth, but overall it's pretty good and the setting is quite novel.

The following is my opinion The author said that the focus of the early plot is to save Zhenzhu. I think Zhenzhu has a clear-headed love mind. He can feel uncomfortable. With the persuasion of others, he can feel that the scumbag has brought him grievances and hurts time and time again. He is changing. He repeatedly mentions the help that the scumbag has given him and does not want to give up this failed relationship. He is a bit persistent in betting that the other party will change and insists on waiting for a vague future. Watching Zhenzhu internally consume himself over and over again, even if the follow-up chapter is still very long, the plot is a bit frustrating at the moment, it is a bit tiring and distressing to watch ꒦ິ^꒦ິ I hope he can change I like Yi Jing very much. He has a strong core, full self-confidence and enthusiasm for everything. He knows what he wants and is practical for it. He has the passion for love and the courage to refuse. He makes me feel why Bai Yueguang is Bai Yueguang. He does not underestimate Zhenzhu because he is a substitute. He considers his situation from his perspective. Xia Jue is really a very gentle and delicate person. Some people think that he is really an angel. He has the means to protect himself and can also hold an umbrella for others. The above are my random thoughts, just to express my thoughts. The author's writing is great, and his writing style is improving little by little😘😘

Overall I can give it four stars There are some punctuation errors in some places, some sentences have no subjects, and some sentences feel strangely broken. I hope my writing can be improved in the future. The plot is still very interesting, the characters are also good, and the subject matter is very novel.

Look good, look good, Jiao Jiao is good at fishing [Adoration] Fishing beauty, long hair, author, just poke my XP like this [Admiration]

It fits my fantasy of the ultimate romantic love very well. I really like the extreme ambiguity of Bai Yueguang's fishing style. I'm also looking forward to the following plot. Good luck to the author. I hope you will be as happy as I was when I read the article [shy]

The characters are very appetizing and very delicious. After chapter 100, the protagonist's emotional progress is actually 0. . It feels like there are too many scenes, but there are too few. . . . . . . . . Um

Ah... It's a bit like an article written on plain water. It didn't make people want to read it in the early stage. It was just very bland. I'll come back with more.

Beautiful (♥∀♥) The moon is so good, the Wenlan puppy I caught fell in love with it and couldn't extricate myself