Online Game: Primordial World: I Am Shangqing Yimei

It's a very rare online game stream, and it's well written (at least it's logical, and if you don't mind me, it's probably typed by hand if you see the typos), I look forward to a promising future, the author must not gg Can game novels be well written about games? It doesn't matter if there is a single female protagonist or two female protagonists. As long as you are a female and you are obsessed with the protagonist, this is very frustrating. If you want to read about the harem, why don't you go straight to urban novels? Authors, please understand your audience

It's a very well-written online game about Oriental Cultivation of Immortals. It's top-notch. Whether it's skill descriptions and settings, or battles and dungeon construction, although there are only a few chapters, you can see that the author has a strong writing style and background.

It's not bad, but I feel like I'm going to be overwhelmed, so I'll give it five stars first. Alas, only the first 10 chapters are interesting, but the rest are boring.

I don't know why it has so many ratings. The author's world view is huge. The plot is well connected. If the follow-up is still up to standard, it will definitely be good. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you. Don't be too steady next time, you'll definitely be able to become a corner

It's quite good to watch. It's an online game of cultivating immortals. It has a magnificent world view. There are not only Journey to the West but also the Immortal Qin Shengtang. I wonder if there will be gods, Han, Demons, Yuan Confucians, Song Wuming, Yao Qing in the future, but there are also many shortcomings. Although Uncle Jiu is very good, he is too awesome. Why did it suddenly appear? Is it in the state of the Conferred Gods List? Moonlight Box suddenly fast-forwarded three years. I guess I felt that the pace of writing was too slow and I needed to speed up the writing, but this also resulted in a lot of things being unclear. Of course, this is also a normal phenomenon because the world view is too grand, the timeline is messy, and the author is in a hurry, leaving many flaws. In addition, this novel also has many Taoist theories, and the writing is very Taoist, but it also underestimates Buddhism. The whole Buddhism seems to have a golden cicada. Except for some redeeming qualities, the others are heinous people. If one side is too righteous and the other side is too evil, it will be distorted. Only the coexistence of good and evil is real. Moreover, the protagonist seems to have made no mistakes and understands everything, which means he is a bit too invincible, which is towards the direction of Shuangwen. I think this novel is about 8.8 To 9.2. Overall it is very good. Come on, author! By the way, it's also too easy for players to obtain magic weapons, right? There are a lot of innate spiritual treasures, but the words in them seem to be bad, and the merit spiritual treasures are also bad, and has the player's strength improved too fast? In three years, all those who have become powerful have become true immortals or above. The fastest is over 200 levels, and the average is over 100 levels. And then the protagonist is level 100, and can still beat him casually. I feel that the player's strength should not be improved so quickly, otherwise the combat power will collapse, and the book must end as soon as possible. It is completely possible to make the strength of everyone in the various Journey to the West copies, and the various robbers to be restricted by the road, to ensure the player's participation, and to increase the overall strength of the player very quickly, so that the combat power collapses later. As for the problem of players' innate magic weapons being in the market, it should be written that the player's magic weapons are reflections or imitations of the innate spiritual treasures, rather than that every top player has two or three innate spiritual treasures that are so awesome. However, these two shortcomings can no longer be corrected, so much has been written.

A very exciting online game called Oriental Cultivation of Immortality, so beautiful! It took me two or three days to finish this book. It didn't feel like a novel at all, and the plot was very rhythmic. It reached a climax when I read the protagonist cutting down the dryad grandma, but the rating was indeed a bit low. If you also like this theme, you can read this book, it's really good! ! !

Come on, it's very well written. Although not many people are watching it now, and the daily income may not be particularly high, I hope you can stick with it. As long as you are still updating, I will watch the short videos every day, please.

It's very good. Compared with the same type, it is rare in that the logic is smooth, the characterization is also very delicate, and the numerical values ​​are not messy so far. I haven't seen any obvious poisonous points so far. It can be called a tomato masterpiece.

It's okay. I don't think too much about it. It's okay to read it as a cool article. If I think about it too much, I will think about the truth written in the book. There are many people in China who know it very well. Especially, if someone follows the trend and says these words, what impact will it have? Wait, a series of things, no need to think about it, I suggest you lose your mind at the beginning, because everyone has different ideas and cares about different things, and they find unreasonable things out of nowhere [laughter]

What should I do? I stayed up late to finish reading it, but I regretted that I should have clicked in to read it before it was finished. Myths and games, oriental classical writing style, I love this style of writing, who gave me such a low rating, don't just read cool writing, okay?