Turned into a Fallen Saintess, I Stun My Childhood Friend

Is it pure love 1v1? [What] @ The setting is good, but there are no emotional scenes, and the male protagonist is almost uninteresting, and the male protagonist's name is weird, Shui Qiu'an, if you turn it upside down and become An Qiu Shui, it will be normal [eating melon]

Changing Marriage, the writing is excellent, there are few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and full descriptions of female abduction. The high martial arts sequence is set with elements of resistance, and the male and female protagonists are twins. The previous books have introduced the power system and character backgrounds, and the battle scenes are well described. Not only must we fight against the erosion of the outer gods, but we must also fight against the conspiracy of the evil church. The heroine's abilities are also dual elements of light + darkness. If she follows this routine and becomes a god in the future, she will probably become a dual god. In the later period, sweet pets, high martial arts campus life, life and death, and the heroine's protective will after being exposed are very interesting. I will give more descriptions. The writing is worth collecting.

After reading the author, I feel that I want to write the male protagonist as bold, informal, and sinister as in other articles. However, the article describes the feelings of a street kid, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable during the reading process. It is like when I want to watch something sweet and someone comes in, it is all disrupted. The female protagonist feels that in order to write about what she has to do at night, her evil is forced to become stronger, and she goes outside the city. Acceptable... But the subject matter is quite good, I hope it can make the male protagonist mature (the male protagonist actually has similar emotions to harem novels, and his behavior is similar). Overall, I can read it, but the reading process is a bit uncomfortable 😣 The rest is okay... After all, this is the author's first book, come on, practice is the only criterion for testing truth... Practice makes perfect, and I hope it won't be like this when I open a new book [Thoughts]

Write more about the interaction between the male and female protagonists and speed up the progress. I'm talking about the emotional line.

Does the author refer to part of my cell prison world view in this book?

The setting is good, but can we turn that disaster into a harmless sequence ability?

Okay, okay, I hope to continue with more

It's so good but no one is reading it. The author definitely didn't make much money and didn't have anything to do with publishing it. It's such a pity. And this is a long story, I keep up with it every day, and I feel cold in my heart [crying]

So far, it suits my taste [laughs]

It looks good, but it's too short. Can you please update it?