The City of the Moon: What Do You Mean the Command God Is a Brat?

Let's talk about the advantages first. Although this book is short in length, it can be seen that the author It took a lot of effort to polish it, no matter how small it is Thoughts and description of character are both pretty good; secondly, the writing The author is really trying hard to make up for some regrets, which is very fitting. My taste (come to Erchuang to make up for the regret, you still want to see the extra knife) No?), There was no collapse of combat power, deus ex machina, overall It's a novel with great potential. But, after all, this book It's still in the early stages, I can't see too far ahead, I don't even know how to do it Can the reader complete this part of the brain lobe perfectly? After all, it's an anticlimax Tail, I've seen too much. All in all, this book is still very suitable for you If a shareholder buys one share, it may become popular in the future.

It's been a long time since I wrote a book review, so it may be a bit verbose (if you find it troublesome, just read the final summary) 1. Let me first comment on the title of the book. To be honest, the first impression this title gave me was not very good (it is easy for people to think it is AI literature). I also read it several times before trying to read it. 2. The content of this book may not be particularly outstanding among monthly articles, but I can be sure that the author wrote it with intention and worked hard to polish the book. Secondly, if you have any questions, the author will think about it himself and accept it if it is correct. At the same time, in the book club, the author often asks us about the content of the book and lets us give our opinions. 3. Generally speaking, the content in the book is more relaxed and humorous, not too dark or heavy. The function of the instructions is actually to promote the development of the plot (after all, an ordinary person has little hope in the city). 4. This is a fan, so the plot will definitely be different from the original plot, as will the character creation (everyone knows the urban environment), and the direction of the event will also change with the intervention of the protagonist (if nothing can be done, it is better to change to another person). You can change some of the tributaries, but you can't stop the main flow. 5. Regarding the content of the book, it is currently written around the Lobe Company (the author has conceived the idea of ​​084). There are many linkages between original abnormalities and other games (yj is yj [thinking]), and there are many small ideas hidden in the article waiting for us to discover. 6. Concerning the creation of the characters in the manuscript, the author is also trying his best to create. The author is also aware of his own shortcomings and is also working hard to adjust the content in the book to be less abrupt. Finally, all I can say about this book is that it is not particularly good (compared to other particularly good works), but it is worth reading. The setting and character creation are in line with Yueji's worldview and are not OOC. Although the book has certain shortcomings, we are fanfics and there must be flaws. Aren't we reading fanfics just to change a certain plot for the protagonist and change the character's tragedy as much as possible? So you can take some time to look at it. Everyone has different preferences. There is no need to force yourself or others.

It's amazing, but I don't know why it's amazing. Anyway, it's amazing.

The current plot is a good adaptation of Lobe Company's original plot. The characters are well-shaped, but the "Command" content in the title is less, and there is almost no daily plot. The plot of the God of Command is a supporting role, mainly following the main plot. The future is promising

Not bad, not bad. I also recommend not listening to the book, because it's so good.

After reading it, I took off my left eye, put the jade eye back on, and used it as a ring [laughs]

How to say it? The writing is okay, and basically it has a good ending. If I have to talk about shortcomings, it is that almost no one reads it, and the word count may be considered small. And why didn't a certain purple finisher appear? However, the author can be considered lively and will basically respond to comments. Add details, add some small movements and so on. Of course I won't write it, and I won't force it.

Come on, but you don't need to add too much. You can reduce the content appropriately. It's purely a personal suggestion. In fact, the author's writing is not bad, but it will make readers more comfortable. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's quite interesting, especially the part about Lean, which is much better than the one in a certain book where Lean was kicked unconscious by Valencina and often showed a "simple and honest smile"

In fact, in the Moon Chronicles trilogy, the lobe part can be speeded up appropriately. More people want to watch the library and bus parts, because the bus is more popular in the Moon Chronicles circle now. Very few people have played the first two parts. Even many people have only heard that there are two works before Bus. Then the company period and the library period are actually very boring. All you write about management abnormality is xxx. Who do you oppress and communicate with? In the library period, you can insert daily life and daily space in the middle of the reception. You can also add some cool book pages to the protagonist and even make it a bit more unique. The protagonist can just hang out outside the library and do other things. In fact, the more attractive one is the research institute period. At this time, you can promote research, fight with Sister Hong, and even open a firm to make money. Instead, he joined the company and started executing the Seed of Light plan. It was very boring, especially since the main character was a supervisor and he didn't fight, which was even more bland.