NBA: I've Won Six Championships, and You Say I Have No Talent?

🤦It's awesome, but the strongest player on Earth only scored 37 points in his first Olympic game. He should have scored at least 40+ or 50+, and his rebounds, blocks, and steals weren't even mentioned. Maybe adding those stats to the 37 points would have been even more satisfying.

Was it enjoyable? It was alright, but the enjoyment wasn't specific enough. There was a basketball novel that started by mocking Jordan, and it provided very specific data for every point, giving a feeling of overwhelming dominance. Then there's the ridiculously excessive padding. He wrote several chapters just about the post-match events.

I'll give you a five-star review, but please don't write this. Instead, write about the Chinese men's national football team winning six World Cups consecutively from 2030 to 2050. (The rest of the text appears to be unrelated and possibly machine-generated: "Sea cucumber beauty, crooked mouth, countless students.")

The pacing is off. After chapter 70, especially after the Olympics, this part becomes rambling and disjointed. What are you even writing? You keep switching sentences back and forth, repeating the same things over and over. What are you trying to achieve? Are you just padding the word count?

The pacing is incredibly slow and it's full of unnecessary details. A single match can be stretched into more than ten chapters, and the post-Olympic reactions can also be written into more than ten chapters. You don't even know the score of the final or how many points the protagonist scored. 🙂

It's well-written, but the updates are a bit too slow.

Mindless as it may be, it's genuinely exhilarating.

Despite being touted as strong from the start, they still lost.

That sounds impressive, but why don't I feel any satisfaction from it?

How come there are only 50 albums? I've almost finished listening to them all.