Five Hahas: I Let Loose After Returning from Berkeley

It is currently given four stars. It is a rare heroine among foreign persimmons. The plot development is quite smooth so far. Some of the author's ideas are added to the original program so that it does not appear too abrupt. In addition to the main line of the program, the daily writing can be more interesting. The number of words is not too many now. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future. Come on

As an entertainment-oriented daily ration novel, it is not bad, but it is only not bad. The protagonist in the early stage is too separated from the other members of Wuha in terms of performance. It is like weakening the others to highlight the protagonist alone. This is a highlight in the variety show group portrait. The description of the background information of the protagonist in the first few pictures is too little. As a result, the protagonist's character, way of doing things, and abilities are completely blind boxes. For example, Lu Han is completely unaware of the protagonist's wrestling. Later, he said that he knew that the protagonist had practiced Sanda, and it felt like he wrote whatever he thought of. In other words, the background of the protagonist was conceived while writing, and the current protagonist is completely superhuman. He can do everything, which looks very fragmented. The solution is also very simple. Give the protagonist a basic identity background. No one is perfect. Appropriate shortcomings can also be transformed into a kind of label to make the character more three-dimensional. It can also be used as an adjustment in love. In short, there are many methods. At the same time, some common sense of life is too idealistic. The concepts of private settings and parallel worlds can indeed avoid illogical aspects that are different from reality. On the contrary, this method of treatment will also reduce the reader's sense of involvement, such as the scene where Liu Haocun is rescued at the airport. The quality of contemporary "Litchi" fans is too high, and the influence and security measures of celebrities are too low. The solution to this is also very simple. When writing a book, open a bean bag next to it and learn more about the details. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better [laughing]

I was very subjective when writing this novel. I didn't want to write all about Lin Yan's performance. I would write out the images of other people. Unfortunately, the writing style is not good. It is my first time to write a novel and I am not very skilled at it. I will try to make it longer, interspersed with Lin Yan's development in the entertainment industry of his own family. Currently, the heroine is planned to appear in more than 50 chapters. This is my first time writing and I have no experience in writing a long form. I wrote the emotional line very quickly and the variety show line collapsed [face covering]. I used AI to polish it later. I will give it 2 stars for the first part.

It's rare to find a novel by Cunzi that is quite well written. As a bookworm who has been on various platforms for more than ten years, it looks pretty good so far and can increase Cunzi's appearance. The only shortcoming is that there is not enough volume.

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I just finished reading the first 11 chapters of the first episode. The writing is really wonderful and the visuals are so strong. I don't know why, but the visuals are so strong. In fact, all I know about Wuha is the short video, and I have never watched a single issue, but reading this novel really aroused my curiosity.

Yes, I personally thought it was okay. The pace is quite fast but not inconsistent. The heroine is relatively rare. The character of the protagonist is very good. I can give it 4 stars in my personal opinion, but I am looking forward to the subsequent development. I will give it 5 stars for the time being.

I love watching it, but updates are very slow. Dear brothers and sisters, please pass by and leave a comment for the author.

It's good to read, so good to read. You must read Haocun's book [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Very well written. This is the first book I have seen where the heroine is Cunzi.