I Bind a Portal and Hand It Over to the Nation from the Start

Yes, it can be seen that AI has changed the writing style and word order, but the content has its own conception and is logical. I hope that the prompt words can be changed to reduce the overly obvious AI flavor, such as not... But… One-word expressions, such as: continue to pursue, continue to follow. You can try changing it to claude sonnet4-6

The content is alright, but the constant, inexplicable phrases like "he signed it" or "he did something" create a strong sense of disconnect in the novel, making it difficult to read deeply.

A unified Earth government. A planetary impact apocalypse fifty years later. And a newly discovered magical world. This isn't simply a story told from the perspective of the University of Tokyo. For humanity. For the future.

The plot is indeed good, but it's written too seriously and depressingly. Everyone is rational and calm, and the battles are bland and predictable, lacking any tension or excitement. Even in the military camp, where formal occasions are serious, there's still plenty of banter and lighthearted banter. Judging by this portrayal, spending too much time there could lead to depression.

Hello author, I hope you see this. I have read all of your writing and have already started preparing for the script adaptation. I have a few points I'd like to raise, and I hope you will pay attention to them later: 1. The novel's overall pacing is quite fast, which is very suitable for adaptation into a comic book series, but many of the lines feel awkward and have a strong robotic feel, you…

So far, it's better than 90% of the other papers submitted to the National People's Congress; the opening is very rigorous.

Of all the novels with a "nationwide theme" (referring to a specific type of fantasy novel), this one has the best pacing so far. First, Earth's development has a clear main theme: saving the world, not just development for its own sake, not just pointless showing off to the world, but for a greater goal. Second, the magical world's combat power is reasonable; the opposing side isn't too stupid.

I only read the first chapter. Some people say that giving top-secret information to company leaders is considered a leak. Here's the question: if you were teleported away from the lab, when you return, do you go out as an unknown source of infection or self-isolate? How do you contact the government with only a dedicated line? A bunch of geniuses... The later parts were just so-so.

This book is good, so why is the rating so low and nobody seems to be reading it? It's so novel! I've only ever read otherworldly stories before, and they're always post-apocalyptic or interstellar. This is my first time reading a magical world. Please, author, don't develop a romance!

Wow, another novel that aspires to be a nationally recognized, professionally-oriented work. I'll give it five stars for its level of professionalism.