Ultraman: Building a New Land of Light on Blue Star

The concept and subject matter are good, and the plot framework is fine, but the writing is too stiff. There's no need to deliberately polish the writing style; just make the sentences flow smoothly, explain the events clearly, maintain logical coherence, avoid grammatical errors, and achieve a normal, fluent narrative. Polishing your basic writing skills will significantly improve the overall quality.

It looks pretty good so far. As long as the later stages don't fall apart, it'll be fine. At least it looks quite comfortable now. The only downside is that the elements could be more diverse, like adding lightning or wind later on.

Update, update, update! All updates, update, update! All beauties, all heroines, all added to the harem! Update! All heroines, all added to the harem! Update! All beauties, all added to the harem! Please, author, update! All heroines, all added to the harem!

A very interesting setting

It's good, keep it up! I hope this one doesn't have a female lead.

Why hasn't it been updated?

The concept is very interesting.

Write quickly, you lazy person!

It's pretty good, worth watching.

Great! I'd recommend it.