Ultraman: Building a New Land of Light on Blue Star

The imagination and subject matter are both good, and the plot framework is okay, but the writing is too stiff. There is no need to deliberately modify the literary talent, just write the sentences smoothly, explain things clearly, be logically coherent, write less erroneous sentences, and achieve a normal and smooth narrative. By polishing the basic writing skills, the overall texture can be greatly improved.

At the moment, it looks pretty good in the later stage as long as it doesn't crash. At least it looks pretty comfortable now, but the elements can be more diversified, such as making thunder or wind later.

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Very interesting setting

It looks good. Come on, I hope this one doesn't have a female protagonist.

Why hasn't it been updated?

The setting is interesting.

Write quickly, lazy people

Pretty good, worth a look

Good! Can recommend