Apocalypse Disaster: An Orphan Escapes Famine Alone with Her Pocket Dimension

The author, please respect the reader's mind. I have seen more than fifty chapters and more than twenty square meters. You put so many things. Would you like to upgrade the space? First, the storage warehouse is one thousand square meters, not much. The second point is to upgrade the thatched house to a two-story building that includes bedrooms, toilets, kitchens, small warehouses, living rooms, and small courtyards. It covers a total area of ​​100 square meters. The two-story building does not need running water and electricity, but it must have sewers and automatic cleaning trash cans. The kitchen must have a four-coal stove (search coal stove on Douyin). The third point is planting and breeding, covering a total area of ​​fifty acres. Small warehouses are used to store more expensive things. What do you think of the author? If you can, please like it.

Not bad, but some details need to be improved. For example, Jinlan read the note left by the heroine and asked how children from poor families could read in that era. She felt that there were some flaws here and it was not realistic enough. Personally, the author wrote it very well.

First, there is a contradiction in what the author wrote before. After planting three acres of land, he did not do anything with the three acres of land in the future and went directly to escape from famine. Second, there is suddenly a sworn sister in the back. The heroine is not a lone wolf and has a baby. Third, the space is quite large and comfortable, and the details are well described. Fourth, the heroine's nonsense is okay, not too much, she just says it, she is more decisive, a bit like a killer in time travel. (The first two poisonous points can be pursued if you don't mind. I think it's acceptable. It's not easy for the author to write, so I can only deduct one star. After all, those two poisonous points are a bit baffling to me [face covering])

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