Life in the Harry Potter Wizarding World After the War

It feels like it has some (love) polish, and the description of the environment and appearance takes several pages, but the plot is pretty good and I can bear to read it, so I just skip large sections of description every time. Reduce one star. I keep writing about the female protagonist's breasts and figure. The male videos have too strong of a harem flavor. I recommend reducing them. The heroine is said to be in her thirties mentally, but she doesn't have that sense of maturity towards men. She is always shy, and she is mainly a therapist. I think being shy is unnecessary. The reality is that medical students know all about porn. I feel that the heroine is claiming that she is psychologically mature, but she is actually still a little girl, so there is a big bug in her character design.

The author's writing style is very mature, which made me feel like reading a foreign classic. It is a very rare post-war novel. The heroine is like the warm sun on a winter afternoon. She not only sheds some wartime tragedy, but also injects a touch of warmth into the people after the war. Worthy of being a Hufflepuff [note]

The content is much more exciting than the introduction~haha~it immediately tied it. The setting is a special post-war story, and the take-all relationship between Si Jiao and Lu Daddy is very interesting [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It has a very daily and warm feeling. I like the emotional line part very much. I like the ambiguous period of restrained exploration. I am very looking forward to the subsequent development of the relationship. And then, if it has nothing to do with the main line, it will not be shaped into an important secondary role to reduce the number of names. When there are more characters, the content will be more scattered. The heroine seems to have a career line but is still in the initial planning stage? The career line can be more concentrated and condensed, and the reason why it is very careful is because the times are different, the emotional implications are different, and the expression method is not the same as in the 21st century, but it is easier to fit the background. Also, the description of the psychological age of the heroine can be reduced. This is enough to write a little. If you write too much, it will be too emphasized and may be cumbersome. I still like this article very much. The above are just my personal thoughts. I wrote it according to the outline of my own ideas. It is very good now.

The heroine's IQ and beauty are both online. The current interactions with Dad Lu and Si Jiao are very touching! The kind-hearted heroine is willing to use her abilities to heal many regrets. She hopes to interact with the little wolf and the puppy too! It's worth seeing [sending my heart]

This book is very cute, I am looking forward to the follow-up. The only drawback is that my sister is a bit too furry. Snape didn't even need to apologize after offending the protagonist. He just showed kindness and the protagonist forgave him. 23333. But it is acceptable to accept that after all, adults live in a decent world, and sometimes they can just muddle along. I hope that the follow-up can teach those stinky men who are stubborn and look down on the protagonist a lesson.

The content is very exciting, the author's writing style is quite mature, the plot development is coherent, and the development between the female protagonist and the two male protagonists is in line with the background and foreshadowing in the article. It is highly recommended to read! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's even, the ambiguity in it is well written, the banquet etiquette is also very interesting, the heroine Margaery is also very charming, the author's evaluation of the original work is relatively objective and calm, overall it is a very good fan sequel. There are several problems. First of all, when the heroine first got along with Snape, Snape lived in Margaery's house as a patient. The heroine was too careful with him, but there was very little behavioral response from Snape, which made the heroine's low status seem humble. Secondly, in terms of chapters, almost every chapter has a long description, either of the environment or the characters. Maybe it only takes two lines when viewed on a large screen, but most of the readers of 🍅 use mobile phones to read it. Those paragraphs basically take up one page, which seems abrupt. Moreover, unless there is an event with a serial number, that is, a scene, the scene changes immediately before and after, and the follow-up to the previous conflict can only be seen in the later chapters, which will make it difficult to react. It's really well written in terms of progress, and I look forward to the follow-up.

It's a masterpiece. It only has a score of 7.3. I think it's just the beginning. I haven't read all of Harry Potter. Basically, I know the outline of the story from reading the fans. It's really great. I won't be able to see this feeling when reading other fans in the future. The background of the article and the feeling of speaking are very consistent with the feeling in Harry Potter, including the description of the scenes. I rarely write long reviews, and this is already the longest one I've ever written. I hope there will be more, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plots. Alas, it's not finished yet. I still have to wait for the update.

It's very good to read. Margery is really a very nice, lovely and charming girl. The author's writing style is very good. I've been a little short of books lately and can't get into anything I read. I finished this book in one go. I just feel like it would be better if there were more details. Sometimes the end of the article always feels like it stops abruptly.