Immortal Cultivation and Longevity: Starting with the Creation Pagoda

Come on, author. Don't leave the harem to concentrate on raising animals, you like to watch the animals grow.

The direction of innovation is not bad, but some details may not have been dealt with decisively in the early stage. This is how development articles compete with each other. Come on, come on, I really like the innovation of the exercises. I like it very much. There isn't that kind of protracted love line, please update it more.

The plot is quite good, and the division of realm levels is gradual, but the leveling up is too fast. I hope the author will write this book slowly! Don't be as fast as the other two books, try to improve this book, come on This realm upgrades too fast. No matter what realm it is, it takes several years to upgrade. Monsters also upgrade to one realm every few years, and there is no time to speed up. What's even more outrageous is that the family members also upgrade at this speed. It's too outrageous.

The overall content is good, there are no poisonous points, and the content is relatively novel. I recommend it. I like the setting of Creation Space very much, the four arts, blood washing, and space are all very good. The type of beasts to control is also very new, including whales. Of course, the most impressive thing is the family friendship. The protagonist, ancestor, parents, younger brothers, and elders of the clan all contribute silently to the family. I hope the author will make an effort to update it.

It's okay. It's a story about a family that's twisted into a rope. It's quite interesting. The only drawback is the fights in the plot. Every time you have to start a verbal fight, and then the fight ends very quickly, and you don't feel the sense of urgency at all. In fact, it's okay if you're not good at writing. I write more about the daily development of the family. No wonder I like to watch this kind of plot [smile][smile][smile]

It's been a long time since I read a book like this from cover to cover The architectural details are quite good, and the hanging openings are not particularly large. It looks quite comfortable, and there are no major obstructions. It just feels a bit pity that an ancestor died.

To be honest, the author's writing style is very good, the plot is smooth, the logic is okay, and there are no contradictions. However, this writing method has become a bit popular recently. I have read several books written this way, but... Well, it feels a bit pretentious. (This is my personal feeling) I have read many books written this way.

Five-star praise. I finished it over the weekend. There are some minor flaws, but they do not affect the overall reading. It is very long and I can tell that the author has polished it carefully. I, an old bookworm, could finish it without even skipping a chapter.

The storyline is tightly conceived and the content is clear and interesting. Good job, the author has worked hard.

At present, it seems that except for the fact that the realm upgrade does not match the qualifications, everything else is okay. If it is Tianlinggen, the speed is acceptable. However, the longer the timeline is, the easier it will be to jump, which is acceptable. In addition, it is a family story, but the protagonist's growth far exceeds that of the ancestor. The ancestor's future positioning must be grasped well, but it must not be completed just because the grasp is not good. The ancestor is already very good to the protagonist. I didn't expect it to be finalized. Forget it, let's leave it at that. We have a long way to go. See you again when we are destined.