Another Ringmaster of the Spider's Nest

It's hard to imagine that in the Spider Nest, only two ring masters are human beings, and the remaining one is a command card man-machine, a giant middle-finger baby, a drunkard, and a super domestic violence woman. Mayig is a human [smile]

Ring Master: Your work! ! ! I heard it! ! ! That's comparable to the melody played by Tibia's pair of humerus and twenty-four ribs! ! !

A+, Ring·New·Power The writing is quite smooth, but sometimes it suddenly switches to first person. There's nothing wrong with the plot. Mebius and Yoshihide are both cute. It's pretty bland so far. I'm looking forward to the smoke war chapter. Having said that, the protagonist sees people who are hiding by seeing colors, and Yoshihide also knows this. So when he ran away, would he break that eye out of fear that Alaya would be discovered?

The character and experience of the protagonist are very interesting (the command is the area), and the personality and language of the original character can be said to be restored. The various little ingenuities in the article are enough to make readers who have played with buses smile (interesting, it turns out this novel feels like this). Overall A+ [shy]

At the end of the exam, your grade is: A+ Here are the comments written for you by the review master: "In a novel art form, the creator breaks out of the conventions of traditional visual art and outlines a brand new world with delicate brushstrokes and unbridled imagination. Unfortunately, the beauty of the work is slightly flawed. The short length, some disconnected paragraphs, the shaping of the protagonist's portrait, and the original plot make your work lack the most important aura. I believe that after improvement, a brand new genre will rise in the urban night sky."

[Please update] Ring Master: Your work! ! ! I heard it! ! ! That's comparable to the melody played by Tibia's pair of humerus and twenty-four ribs! ! !

A Although the writing style is slightly lacking, the impact and expression brought by the words are a bit flat, and there is a slight gap with the emotional explosion point that should appear in the plot. At present, it is mainly foreshadowing and there is no major event as a climax. However, the flaws are not concealed. Overall, it is a very excellent work.

Smooth, comfortable and non-toxic, the protagonist is a tsundere. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the future of the story can be expected. The characterization is smooth and the original characters are lovable. Perhaps I have eaten too much history. This book is very comfortable in terms of narrative and story transfer. The foreshadowing is just right, and there will be no plot that makes the audience confused and thinks it is the author's negligence. Comprehensive evaluation super large cup

The language is very comfortable and the characters are also very likable. Teacher, you are A+!

Could it be possible to make Mathias more human by the end? I don't want to change the ending, I just want to see what it would be like for Mattias to transform from a heartless beast to a human little by little.