Marvel: Starting at Kamar-Taj

It looks very good so far. There are currently few descriptions of fighting scenes, mostly daily life, and the characterization is very good. As a friend of Stark, let's see how the Winter Soldier is dealt with in the subsequent plot. There should also be X-Men in the plot. Can you also recommend Iron Man to learn magic and design a magic suit?

Hehe, I am the author, I take it with a pinch of salt

I really don't understand why this book has such a low rating? If it's because of the protagonist's setting and cheats, I think it's appropriate enough. What other cheats can there be in current Marvel fan fiction? Marvel has developed all the plots that can be imagined, and the plots developed by the author are arranged in a reasonable and consistent manner and will not be abrupt. As for the characters, as far as I can see, none of them are out of line, and they are not awkward, and the characters in the original plot are not awkward to talk about; the plot is very thoughtful, and the links to each major Marvel event are not rigid, and it is fun to watch. I now want the author to write it for me, don't use AI, just be real if you dare to break the chapter [laughing]

Yes, it's well written. I don't think it's too annoying at the moment, but the American humor needle doesn't stick [like]

I like the current plot setting and writing style. I hope to add some plots in the future to make the story line as complete as possible (I still prefer to read long articles with millions of words). It would also be good if there is a CP.

It's okay, except that the protagonist's inner monologue and narration are awkward. Some new chapters are very bloody and toe-to-toe at the beginning, but they get rounded out later on. Now I see Captain America 3 (The second part of the Hell Chapter is very embarrassing)

The characterization is quite delicate and the ideas are clear [laughing and crying]

So far, it seems to be a relatively good book, keep up the good work

It's very interesting, relaxing and interesting. Isn't it just interesting to read a book?

The author didn't handle it very well in some places, but it's okay. But I've always been curious about what poison means? Is it poison if it doesn't meet expectations and doesn't satisfy your heart?