Roleplaying System: Breaking into Showbiz with Bai Lu

Overall, I think it was okay. The relationship between the male and female protagonists was really sweet, and my body felt warm when I looked at it. But there are still many problems. For example, the heroine's goose-like laughter is standard, so the heroine's laughter must be a goose's cry, otherwise there will be a description like this: "But this time the laughter is not a goose's cry, but a very light and small laughter." (Probably) You must know that when the male and female protagonists get along, the female protagonist mostly smiles, so this kind of description appears extremely frequently. Then either the heroine doesn't believe in herself, and the hero goes to comfort her. Also, when filming, I often cross paths and bring things that happen in reality into the scenes, which makes it quite uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, there were some upgraded skills before, but in the end, it was found that they had not been upgraded. For example, at the beginning, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist changed from friendly to close. When the male protagonist checked it later, I found that it was still friendly. Maybe because there were too many skills, it was a bit overwhelming. I only read more than 80 chapters, and I was already a little dizzy. It seemed that at the time of the 63rd shot, the heroine kissed the hero's face, thinking that there would be progress later, but the result was that they were still flirting with each other. I was so anxious that I wanted to rush in and press the two of them together. The overall plot is that the male protagonist acquires skills and upgrades through acting, and gets praise from others. The female protagonist feels sorry for the male protagonist who is injured during filming, and then doubts whether she is qualified for the role. The male protagonist goes to comfort the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is moved to regain her strength. It ends perfectly. The male and female protagonists are on different crews, and the female protagonist goes to visit the crew. In fact, there are some unreasonable things, but watching them get along with each other automatically ignores it. There is no way, the writing is too sweet. So this time I will give it a four-star rating. If the author writes better later or makes some changes, I will definitely give it a five-star rating.

It's so beautiful. Bailu Entertainment is No. 1. It gets sweeter as you go to the back. There shouldn't be so many words without a rating. At least it's above nine points.

It looks great, but it's a little messy. But it looks really good. I hope it can be corrected.

Yeah, that's good. I can't stand the same old running man anymore. I need this kind of change.

How to say it! This is a novel that can be read or not read, and it cannot be said that it does not match the title of the book! But it really doesn't feel like it matters much. A light novel, like a dream or a young adult anthology!

Very good, really good, but why does the male protagonist's entertainment career line seem to jump sideways repeatedly?

Good looking, good luck to the author

It's very nice. I like this writing style. In fact, I would have given you three stars at most. I like the writing style, but it's rare. I'll give you one star, and then one star for encouragement. (There are a lot of logical inconsistencies in the previous article. I don't know if you changed the text or something. It feels like you are reading it and suddenly realize that something is not right. My suggestion is that if you want to continue writing, save some manuscripts and make sure that there are no chapters, and reorganize the previous article, which is about the first seventy chapters. Of course, I am just giving an opinion)

Give yourself a good review

The main character is pretty good