Dragon Raja: What If Lu Mingfei Were a Girl?

The fanfic is written from a very unique perspective, and the emotional description is delicate and remarkable. The rest of the problems are common problems for newbies, but the overall feeling is very good. I suggest you read less data and focus on writing a book. Come on^0^~

It basically matches the original work with some changes to the character, and I really like it. After all, Lu Mingfei in the original work is a bit too miserable. It looks more comfortable here, but it inherits the sadness in Lu Mingfei's heart from the original work.

There are quite a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics that I read on Qidian and Tomato, but there are basically no ones like the author who have made so many changes. How should I put it? Although the story feels a bit fragmented because too many changes have been made, and some parts of the text are a bit repetitive. But the atmosphere is right, I just felt a bit depressing when watching Dragons. However, I hope the author can leave some of Lu Mingfei's nonsense words to make Lu Mingfei more vivid.

The psychological description is very delicate, but the pace is a bit slow. I promise with my time

It's okay, but I don't know if I read it a little late, and whether it has been revised before. There are several paragraphs that are very different from what I first watched, and the content of the plot before and after is a bit strange. I remember that the cousin beat Zhao Menghua in the public toilet, and the two people acted as if that paragraph had never happened. There was also a paragraph where Guderian came to find Lu Mingfei, and then Guderian's follow-up stopped abruptly. , I remember the vomiting of blood in the physical education class mentioned above, but after the physical changes, it seems that running 800 meters is not a fault, and then it is said that the protagonist is not in physical education because of his poor health. Sometimes a paragraph will be repeated in different chapters. I hope the author will check it carefully when writing. Thank you. I personally think this book is well written. If these details are corrected, the reading experience will be much better. Thank you.

This food is so delicious🥺Men will get menstruation after eating it🙄Women will get crazy after eating it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱It's so handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It's so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰 It's God who is my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😙

Hemingway once suggested that in fiction only the tip of the iceberg is revealed—the reader only sees what is above the water—and that what you know about the characters, although never entering the story, forms the bulk of the iceberg. This is what gives the story weight and depth. The portrayal of characters in this work is a classic interpretation of this. If you want to write that your uncle loves Lu Mingfei, write that he is usually not good at words, but he will come to school wearing a work hat to ask for an explanation; if you want to write that your aunt loves Lu Mingfei, write that she saves a few pocket money to buy things, but she will choose the most comfortable underwear for Lu Mingfei. By blending the character descriptions into daily chores, you seem to be able to see the daily necessities of life of this family. It seems that there really is such an ordinary and happy family in a certain corner of the world, but their joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys are recorded, that's all. I really like this kind of delicate writing style. They are like the light shining on the characters, depicting the characters bit by bit from different angles. I enjoy this game of outlining the characters through shadows. But therein lies the problem. If you want to use shadows to outline characters, you need shadows from different angles, and the angles of the shadows have to be just right. Even so, it is very troublesome to outline the characters in this way. Speaking in human terms - it takes a lot of energy for the author to write, and it also requires readers to have enough empathy and be able to bring the character's perspective to feel other people's feelings towards them. All in all, from a reader's perspective, if you are a person with delicate emotions and active thinking, then this book is most likely suitable for you. In "Lonely Rock", Ryo once said to Pochi-chan that songs with a distinctive style may not necessarily become popular, but they will definitely touch the hearts of some people. I am convinced of this. I hope this thoughtful work can be discovered by more thoughtful readers. After reading the Lord of Bronze and Fire part, I have some feelings that I would like to share, hoping to help the author. As the first S-class mission, the previous chapter foreshadowed a lot of dangers, but when it came to the actual duel with Norton, this sense of urgency was not reflected. Ye Sheng and Yaji were not injured by the Dragon King. Nono was attacked because she took the initiative to shoot at the Dragon King, and Lu Mingfei was not even attacked by Norton from beginning to end. What the author wants to write is that dragons are not all bloodthirsty tyrants, but this does not necessarily mean that Norton must not take action. After all, he is the King of Bronze and Fire. For Norton, Cassel College plays the role of an invader. Norton has enough reasons to kill all the invaders, and Lu Mingfei also has enough motivations to go to war with Norton to protect Nono. The more tit-for-tat conflicts and fierce battles with the enemy, the more it reflects Lu Mingfei's strength as an S-class and her determination to protect others. However, in this part of the show, Lu Mingfei does not even have a clear enemy, and it is difficult for the audience to get deeply involved in that tense atmosphere. This is just my personal opinion. If this comment confuses the author, please ignore it. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people, and there will also be a thousand evaluations. I am just one of thousands of readers; I hope that I can provide inspiration to others rather than disrupt other people's inspiration. I sincerely hope that this book will get better and better.

Although some settings are different from the original work, I personally think it is innocuous. The author's writing style is more delicate and gentle, and the description of the protagonist lacks the inferiority complex that always accompanies it and has more perseverance. This is a rather special book among the Dragon Clan fanfics.

I started writing the real thing and fake it. I started writing it based on the real thing. Update Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Hurry Up

After reading just a few chapters, I already understand it. It feels like it has nothing to do with the original. It's a transgender novel that uses the Dragon Clan template. I watched it for a long time and kept talking about how he changed.