Her Late Jade Fragrance, Her Omega

The story is a bit thin Mainly focusing on the relationship and "redemption" of the main and deputy CPs But the meaning of salvation is too strong The sense of paranoia I want to describe will seem a bit superficial. Lost some of its authenticity as an original character There is a kind of superficial "mutual rescue" As a novel, I feel that the points of conflict are also very weak. There are almost no contradictions in the main cp So that the feelings come with a kind of unclear feeling I feel like I fell in love so deeply in the blink of an eye Maybe Yinhe's feelings come from what he didn't get in his previous life. Then Lan Lan's feelings are very hard to understand. Strong emotions are a bit hard to understand And there's no point in the secret love line either. Because it feels like they only met during the debate competition from Lan Lan's perspective. Did you fall in love with the Galaxy Debate? There are still other hidden clues, but I didn't see them. The emotional line of the deputy CP also has a lot of foreshadowing, but it feels like it's not fully explained. I feel that as a reader observing the emotions of the characters in the novel Or just have a sense of immersion and experience this experience with the character at the same time. This creates empathy and emotions for the characters in the story. Or you have a sense of narrative, listening to the character tell his story and resonate with him, thus creating feelings. But this one doesn't It feels like both the main and deputy CPs are indulging in their own emotions There is no experiential backdrop for events to become stories. So it seems that the emotions are very thin But I read more of Interstellar ABOs, which tend to focus on battle emotions and group portraits. I still read less articles that focus on daily emotions, and the author does not use very popular bad jokes. The whole article is quite comfortable to read, but the characters and the plot are a bit thin, so I think this book is still very good.

It's beautiful [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Firstly, it's too short, and secondly, it would be perfect if the extra story showed that the male and female protagonists canceled the three-year period because they fell in love [shy]

I hope there are more books like this. I can't get enough of them. It would be nice if they were longer. The extras are very sweet and I like them very much.

The writing style is awkward, but my readers are very cute. They really take a good look at my works and like [Send Hearts], which is one of the motivations for my creation [Send Hearts]