Another World: My Growth Has No Limits

The writing is very good. The early plot is dull, but the subsequent development is very good. The latest chapter is just about the protagonist passing the test and being admitted. It is very enjoyable to read it in one sitting. About a dozen chapters into the past life, it was very sudden and there was no foreshadowing at all. When it comes to dealing with past life memories later on, it's okay and you can read it. Maybe it was because grandpa couldn't live long, and he couldn't get much promotion in the village, so he was anxious. He just handed over the deer skin and waited in the village for another year. It should be much better. The author forcibly sets up the feeling of conflict, but it is still acceptable There are repeated descriptions when there are more than 30 chapters. I guess I uploaded the wrong chapter or posted the outline. It looks quite awkward.

After about ten chapters, I didn't see Goldfinger or Cool Point, but I saw something else. Just like the rich cannot think about the poverty of the poor, this novel is a door. When you open it, you can see some things that you could not imagine before. I hope the author can write at his own pace It's a pity that the conflicts laid out in the first 30 chapters are full of problems, and the revenge is also very sloppy. After browsing the table of contents of the later chapters, I found that the protagonist's plan is to eagerly embark on the test, the academy, etc. It's outrageous. It took only a few days for her to awaken her talent at the age of 11, but her relatives rushed to get into trouble and immediately took revenge. She abandoned all restraints and hit the road. Is this the plot that the author laid out for 30 chapters and screened out slow readers? Classically designed a special opening, and then wanted to follow the old path of routine writing I checked again and found that there was a bug in Grandpa Harvey's exit. Anyway, it was not designed well for the sake of writing him to death. He was buried twice when he was buried. There was also a sloppy revenge plot design, which just happened to reveal the key props needed by the protagonist. The subsequent design was also very problematic. Forget it, the slow start of the novel originally attracted slow readers. I was not a slow reader at first, but I finally had the patience to read it. When I saw the transition of conflict and revenge, I knew it was bad. The sense of fragmentation caused by the inconsistent style of the novel made it impossible for me to read it.

No, this is too slow. After reading it for so long, I feel that the author has immersed himself in his art, but will anyone really see such a photo?

It's a genius style, but most of the 30-odd episodes describe the hardships of life. It's only around 37 that we start killing people and walking out of the village. Let's see how it develops later. The front is basically foreshadowing.

Five-star encouragement, but the writing is indeed good, but the "growth" of the protagonist's talent does not seem to be reflected recently. For example, the protagonist's injury, the protagonist's talent should be able to improve the healing and recovery ability, but it does not seem to be reflected as before.

Hiding for the sake of hiding, a contradictory individual, a protagonist looking for abuse.

It's not bad, there are some flaws, but it's still readable It's not interesting anymore. I opened a plug-in and didn't even mention it later. It's really tiring to look at it in the college assessment.

It's very depressing to watch now, very touching, and very sad [crying] The front part is really good, but it's a pity that it's ruined by adding a bunch of past life memories at the end.

The writing is delicate, refreshing, and the plot is very reasonable. Food!

Western knight literature, worth reading