He was an ordinary person in the modern city, but at an unexpected moment, his soul fell into another world. When he opened his eyes, he was already a child in an unknown town in the East China Sea. Destiny seemed to have been planned long ago - when he was still ignorant, a fruit as black as condensed night quietly appeared in front of him. Dark Fruit, the closest thing to "infinity" among Devil Fruits. From that moment on, the boundary between light and darkness was only between his thoughts.
Reader comments
The author of Darkness cannot be elementalized, but you must understand that if you are hit, you won't be able to see the pain, but Darkness will absorb the damage once you use the fruit ability. To put it simply, the health bar and stamina gauge are shared, and you will not die if your stamina is not empty. This is the awesome thing about his inability to elementalize.
Not straightforward, not invincible
Don't follow the ship, the crew characters are original
But the writing is good and the plot is okay too
It's very, very slow, with detailed descriptions and eloquent plot.
In the early stage, it was a bit overwhelming, although there can be explanations.
I haven't even looked through the comments section in the middle of reading yet.
Just the part I've seen now
Please forgive me for any oversight.
For example, the reason why the Dark Fruit is so powerful in the hands of Blackbeard is because he himself is very strong.
No fruit has ever left a deep impression and scar on the redhead.
In the hands of the protagonist, it's like having an extra ordinary superpower that can be expected in the future, but is a bit special for the time being.
Just like the frozen fruit in Kuzan's hand in Ice Age, the protagonist can only make a small ice pit to slip on other people, or condense the ice cubes in his hand and hit others.
The intensity difference is too big
Of course, there is also the delicate control and development process of writing fruits.
Specifically, the intensity is still too low.
The gravitational force emitted by the fruit is only twice the strength or weight of the protagonist.
Even if we go to sea, we can only swallow a space the size of a watermelon.
The special move is a punch that combines the weapon color with the fruit ability. In its full state, it can hit four or five punches (Blackbeard flat A weakened version)
In fact, the development is quite comprehensive.
Just came to release the additional long-range attack of gravity (lack of accuracy)
Small-scale balance destruction, additional mid- and short-range adsorption and pulling control
Combining the fruit's ability at close range with an armed punch burst
Suction and long-range attack defense with added gravitational effect on the hand
Very calm, considerate and thoughtful,
Although I don't have enough imagination, my strength is actually too low to support it.
Delicate and beautiful, but really slow and not straightforward
Overall, it's good, but it feels like the pace is a bit slow. Maybe it's to take care of the crew. After all, there are mostly original crew members who need to grow up. However, the Dark Fruit can be used to steal the abilities of other fruits for the crew. After all, you can't expect anyone to be like Zoro and Sanji without the fruit to become the imperial lieutenant.
Apart from the early combat power, there is nothing else to complain about. For me, this pirate novel is a masterpiece! The protagonist is very stable!
Very beautiful, very holy lady, don't kill the "pirates", play house, make a living account, let's get into the trap together
Everything else is well written, but the key is why it can't absorb damage? This is one of the most significant features. Although it cannot be elementalized and the pain is doubled, it can absorb damage.
The descriptions are detailed and the writing is exquisite. It doesn't blow you away as soon as you get the devil fruit. It makes people feel like they are there [like][like][like]
As far as writing is concerned, it's the best in One Piece
I feel like there are very few Pirates fanfics on Tomato. Many of them are unfinished. I don't know if I can stick with this [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
How should I put it? It seems that the protagonist has never killed anyone. The navy already has a "non-killing general". Does the protagonist also want to be a "non-killing pirate"?
The writing style is very delicate, I feel like an old author, but sometimes the words are a bit sloppy
It's good and worth reading. Come on, author.
The writing style is much better than that of other fics. I just hope that I can put my mind to it, maintain my form, and finish it on a level level.
The taste is still very good, except that when writing the Empress and Robin, they are a bit out of character in the original work and bring in some of the author's personal goods. The other characters are well described.
It can be seen that the author really likes the Empress and Robin [awkward laugh]
It's well written, very detailed, and the chapters are too long. 2,000 Words is enough, so you can easily find where you want to read it later.
It's okay. If I keep writing in this format, my results won't be too bad. There's not much traffic now.
Very good, relatively smooth
Good book, okay, not bad
Keep it up I'm staring at you
A good book
Looks good, don't miss it
The pace is a bit slow, but it's okay. I hope there won't be Spring and Autumn Brushwork in the future.
Can't Dark Fruit be used to get Devil Fruit? ?
Will the protagonist get the Shock Fruit this time?
Author, your description of the Dark Fruit is missing something. The Dark Fruit will receive double the pain, which is good, but the Dark Fruit can absorb all damage to the body. There will be no wounds until the pain value reaches the limit. This is also the compensation for the Dark Fruit not being able to be elementalized.
This novel has details and although the plot is very light, it is worth reading.
The writing is very logical, the main character's purpose is clear, and I found that this book has a lot of words in a single chapter, with more than 1.5 Million words written in less than 300 chapters.
The author of Darkness cannot be elementalized, but you must understand that if you are hit, you won't be able to see the pain, but Darkness will absorb the damage once you use the fruit ability. To put it simply, the health bar and stamina gauge are shared, and you will not die if your stamina is not empty. This is the awesome thing about his inability to elementalize.
Not straightforward, not invincible Don't follow the ship, the crew characters are original But the writing is good and the plot is okay too It's very, very slow, with detailed descriptions and eloquent plot. In the early stage, it was a bit overwhelming, although there can be explanations. I haven't even looked through the comments section in the middle of reading yet. Just the part I've seen now Please forgive me for any oversight. For example, the reason why the Dark Fruit is so powerful in the hands of Blackbeard is because he himself is very strong. No fruit has ever left a deep impression and scar on the redhead. In the hands of the protagonist, it's like having an extra ordinary superpower that can be expected in the future, but is a bit special for the time being. Just like the frozen fruit in Kuzan's hand in Ice Age, the protagonist can only make a small ice pit to slip on other people, or condense the ice cubes in his hand and hit others. The intensity difference is too big Of course, there is also the delicate control and development process of writing fruits. Specifically, the intensity is still too low. The gravitational force emitted by the fruit is only twice the strength or weight of the protagonist. Even if we go to sea, we can only swallow a space the size of a watermelon. The special move is a punch that combines the weapon color with the fruit ability. In its full state, it can hit four or five punches (Blackbeard flat A weakened version) In fact, the development is quite comprehensive. Just came to release the additional long-range attack of gravity (lack of accuracy) Small-scale balance destruction, additional mid- and short-range adsorption and pulling control Combining the fruit's ability at close range with an armed punch burst Suction and long-range attack defense with added gravitational effect on the hand Very calm, considerate and thoughtful, Although I don't have enough imagination, my strength is actually too low to support it. Delicate and beautiful, but really slow and not straightforward
Overall, it's good, but it feels like the pace is a bit slow. Maybe it's to take care of the crew. After all, there are mostly original crew members who need to grow up. However, the Dark Fruit can be used to steal the abilities of other fruits for the crew. After all, you can't expect anyone to be like Zoro and Sanji without the fruit to become the imperial lieutenant.
Apart from the early combat power, there is nothing else to complain about. For me, this pirate novel is a masterpiece! The protagonist is very stable!
Very beautiful, very holy lady, don't kill the "pirates", play house, make a living account, let's get into the trap together
Everything else is well written, but the key is why it can't absorb damage? This is one of the most significant features. Although it cannot be elementalized and the pain is doubled, it can absorb damage.
The descriptions are detailed and the writing is exquisite. It doesn't blow you away as soon as you get the devil fruit. It makes people feel like they are there [like][like][like]
As far as writing is concerned, it's the best in One Piece
I feel like there are very few Pirates fanfics on Tomato. Many of them are unfinished. I don't know if I can stick with this [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] How should I put it? It seems that the protagonist has never killed anyone. The navy already has a "non-killing general". Does the protagonist also want to be a "non-killing pirate"?
The writing style is very delicate, I feel like an old author, but sometimes the words are a bit sloppy
It's good and worth reading. Come on, author.
The writing style is much better than that of other fics. I just hope that I can put my mind to it, maintain my form, and finish it on a level level.
The taste is still very good, except that when writing the Empress and Robin, they are a bit out of character in the original work and bring in some of the author's personal goods. The other characters are well described. It can be seen that the author really likes the Empress and Robin [awkward laugh]
It's well written, very detailed, and the chapters are too long. 2,000 Words is enough, so you can easily find where you want to read it later.
It's okay. If I keep writing in this format, my results won't be too bad. There's not much traffic now.
Very good, relatively smooth
Good book, okay, not bad
Keep it up I'm staring at you
A good book
Looks good, don't miss it
The pace is a bit slow, but it's okay. I hope there won't be Spring and Autumn Brushwork in the future.
Can't Dark Fruit be used to get Devil Fruit? ?
Will the protagonist get the Shock Fruit this time? Author, your description of the Dark Fruit is missing something. The Dark Fruit will receive double the pain, which is good, but the Dark Fruit can absorb all damage to the body. There will be no wounds until the pain value reaches the limit. This is also the compensation for the Dark Fruit not being able to be elementalized.
This novel has details and although the plot is very light, it is worth reading.
The writing is very logical, the main character's purpose is clear, and I found that this book has a lot of words in a single chapter, with more than 1.5 Million words written in less than 300 chapters.
So far it's good.