A Sickly Beauty Survives in the Supernatural World, While the Big Shot Begs for a Hug

I like the plot very much, and the genre is also my favorite food and dessert area. I just feel that the paragraphs and sentences are sometimes a bit strange😳. From time to time, the sentences are a little confusing, and occasionally the wording is a little different, which is a bit dramatic, but overall it is still very good. I hope the author can improve it more in the future, come on! This one is for the love line, which is too vague. The introduction describes the interaction with Gu, and the target is the two male protagonists, but the most obvious love line in the current chapter is the cp with Bai and Gu. It is very difficult to see what the author wants to write. I feel that if it is cp, it is better to make it clear in the introduction or the text (if you want to sacrifice Bai's feelings, treat it as if I didn't say it, it would be more shocking (being beaten))

The emotional drama is a bit branched. The male lead is Gu. Bai is good-looking, but I'm curious whether he is more of a friend or a lover, or more than a friend, but not a lover. Or is Cheng Zi the heartthrob? The lines are divided into multiple roles and multiple male leads.

I don't know if it's 1v1 or more, but it's very interesting to watch. The protagonist is making progress, and he's very passionate about relationships, and he's the leader. Later, a little fan girl of Shirakami, the bastard F, appears and attacks the protagonist. It can be seen that she wants to kill the protagonist. But her attack was blocked, and although she was injured, it finally allowed her to leave. Let me change it, the introduction is marked with cp. I have more than 1v thoughts because the protagonist is a bit of a heartthrob.

The writing is very interesting and worth reading. Who is the other male protagonist? So far, only Bai has shown that he likes the protagonist, but the introduction also mentions Gu. In the end, is it Gu who comes first, or Allin?

It's okay. The writing is a bit like allin.

Wow, it's delicious to eat, right? A slightly unpopular cookie treasure novel (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ) The plot is very good and the flow is endless. The orange baby is also very cute. He can also make desserts and the interaction between the young lovers is also very sweet. Looking forward to the author's follow-up [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's quite good-looking, with delicate emotional descriptions and vivid characters.

I asked what the author's eyes were like, it turned out to be Wenzhu who is very big [shy][shy][admiration][admiration]

It looks good, I like it, but sometimes the words are wrong

It looks good. I like Luo Cheng very much. There are some typos in some sentences and the emotional lines are a bit messy. Come on big