Twelve Years After Transmigrating, I Was Summoned by Illyasviel After Death

The servant who traveled through the second time, the alien among aliens. Alas, Brother Shen is going to have his dream shattered again [crying] Looking forward to the day when Illya changes her profession to a magical girl.

Loli five stars. The writing is also good. It's just that sometimes it feels too literary and youthful, and it's obvious that it's intended to be sensational, but I still felt a little embarrassed while reading it. For example, in the bedtime story session, I wanted to write about the protagonist's past hardships and ordinary life, I wanted to write about a blacksmith who treated him like a son, and I wanted to write about an ordinary person from another world. But this sense of intention is too obvious. From the protagonist's mouth and speaking in this tone, it is like the protagonist is trying to prove himself and say how ordinary and pitiful he was in the past. My story is also very warm and profound. There is an atmosphere between the lines that is similar to "moaning for no reason" and trying to "move yourself". But no matter what, the excellent writing and the lovely Illya are full of stars! Come on, author, don't cut it or pigeonhole it

The writing was okay, but it was very frustrating and I was beaten throughout the whole process. Also, the author kept emphasizing how ordinary and hard-working the protagonist was, which made me moan for no reason. Apart from these two points, everything else is fine. As for how much money is left after excluding these two points... Overall, I can give a four-star encouragement.

The writing is very good, and Illya is cute. The only small flaw is that the character of the protagonist is still a bit unsure, and he keeps jumping back and forth between the ordinary and the extraordinary (brother, you have already fought with the devil, and you are still ordinary. You have to get a special attack against the devil anyway). In short, it is quite good-looking.

Yes, someone finally wrote a story about Illya as a female protagonist😋 Also, I want to see the knife🥺

5 Stars! It must be 5 stars. It is not a cool novel, but more like a true story. I saw in the comment area before that the protagonist was not strong enough to crush me and felt aggrieved. Fortunately, I was not persuaded to quit. This book is not the kind of book that is crushing and enjoyable all the way. What I read is the plot. The writing is very good. The interaction between the protagonist and Illya is also great, Loli Sega! (Don't call me)

Love watching the tsundere little Illya [like] and the Brave Time Travel article

This is the Fate fanfic that touched me the most. The author nailed the plot, settings, and characters so perfectly. The emotional development between the protagonist and Illya is also very perfect. The relationship between the two develops in daily life and sublimates in choices. This is what I want to see! ! ! ! ! Byakuya's identity as a hero is portrayed extremely well! He integrates responsibility and tenderness into his bones, and casts his commitment and responsibility into his inscriptions. He is a protagonist who brings endless laughter and tears to people [love] [love] [love]

It's very honorable. It doesn't have any negative points for me. It's very comfortable to read. The author's update efficiency is so high that I don't even have to think about raising the book. The heroine Illya is really good. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] To review, I just saw that the books that Lao Zuo wrote before are all about 20,000 to 300,000 words long. I hope Lao Zuo will not be a eunuch this time. Come on, Lao Zuo [blowing kiss]

The writing is very good. It's rare to see a single female protagonist named Ilia. It's okay. I like the protagonist's character very much. Although I can already predict the knife, but come on, the author is great. I'll give you points, so hurry up and update it!