Twelve Years After Transmigrating, I Was Summoned by Illyasviel After Death

A Servant who has traveled through time twice, an alien among aliens. Sigh, it's another dream shattered for Gilgamesh 😢 Looking forward to the day Illya becomes a magical girl.

Five stars for the loli character. The writing is also okay. However, it sometimes feels too pretentious and sentimental; you can tell it's trying to be melodramatic, but I still felt a bit awkward reading it. For example, in the bedtime story section, it tries to depict the protagonist's past hardships and ordinariness, the blacksmith's kindness to him, and the otherworldly tale of an ordinary…

The writing is alright, but it's frustrating because the protagonist is constantly getting beaten up. Also, the author keeps emphasizing how ordinary, miserable, and hardworking the protagonist is, which feels a bit like pointless whining. Aside from these two points, it's fine. As for how much else is left after removing those two... Overall, I'd give it four stars as encouragement.

The writing is quite good, and Ilya is adorable. The only minor flaw is that the protagonist's character design isn't quite right; he keeps jumping between ordinary and extraordinary (dude, you've already defeated the Demon King, how can you call yourself ordinary? You should at least have some kind of magic resistance skill!). Overall, it's still quite enjoyable.

Great, finally someone's writing a single-heroine story about Illya! 😋 Also, I want to read some angst! 🥺

5 Stars! Definitely 5 stars! This isn't a wish-fulfillment story; it feels more like a realistic one. I saw comments saying the protagonist's power level wasn't high enough to easily dominate, which was frustrating, but thankfully I wasn't deterred. This book isn't the kind where you just crush everything and have a blast; the focus is on the plot, which is very well written. The interactions between the protagonist and Ilya are also fantastic. Lolis are the best! (Don't shock me!)

I love reading about the tsundere little Ilya 👍 and also stories about heroes who travel through time.

This is the most touching Fate fanfic for me. The author has perfectly handled the plot, setting, and character personalities. The development of the relationship between the protagonist and Illya is also perfect; their relationship grows in everyday life and is elevated through choices—this is exactly the kind of story I wanted to read! The portrayal of Byakuya as a hero is superb!

It's fantastic! For me, there were no major flaws; it was a very enjoyable read. The author's update frequency is ridiculously high, so I don't even need to worry about waiting for the book to finish. And the female lead, Ilya, is truly excellent. Keep up the good work, author! 😘😘😘 Just a quick comment: I just saw that all of Lao Zuo's previous books stopped at around 200,000 to 300,000 words. I hope Lao Zuo won't abandon this one. Keep it up, Lao Zuo! 😘

It's very well written. It's a rare story with a single female lead, Ilya. I really like the main character's design. Although I can already foresee some angst, keep up the good work, author! I'll give you a rating, so please update soon!