After Binding to the Underworld System, I Became a Target

There are two heroines, mentors and friends, but the friendship part is still too little, the characters are not deep enough, and there are still too few female characters in the whole story. The high-ranking officials are male, and they are fathers and grandfathers. The proportion of male characters in other teammates, criminals and other passers-by is too high. It would not be awkward if some of them were replaced by women. A female team can better build the friendship between sisters and comrades. The heroine has a growth line, but the pace of growth is a little slow, the utilization rate of golden fingers is not high, and there are also problems with the connection between the two. I hope the plot design can be more rounded, thank you to the author.

It feels good to see it now, but the updates are a bit sparse, the pace is fast, and there are not too many twists and turns.