Online Game: The Boy Who Cross-Dresses

The setting is interesting, but if you can't change the habit of writing with too many narrations, the rating will not improve after all. It keeps explaining why the characters do what they do. It has a strong sense of preaching and teaching you how to read this novel. It is too uncomfortable to read. The plot of so many chapters is slowly pushed forward. I hope it can be improved. I will give it a third copy for the time being.

OK OK [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Can the author cheer up?

Thumbs up, author, cheers

Is this a theoretical flow game? [Face covering] I can't understand a lot of big things.