One Piece: Zhu Yan, the Ferocious Beast of War

Very nice. It feels like a war, but I hope the author won't be stabbed in the back by Oda [laughing and crying]. I've been confused by the plot of One Piece recently. The fruits and domineering have not kept up with the times. Now is the time to become a god.

The writing is very good. No poisonous points have been found so far, and no romantic plot has been found. It is all about improving strength. Are you going to unify the world later? So why not just start developing a kingdom?

Update, update, more updates, I haven't seen such a cool pirate fanfic in a long time, as long as it doesn't end up licking Luffy's family, I will definitely follow it.

I have seen Chapter 86, and after reading it, I think there is no big problem. As for Whitebeard, how can I put it, their combat power is pretty much the same, there is no need to be too serious. To be honest, young Whitebeard should not be able to defeat Garp and Sengoku's team-up head-on, but if he can't be defeated, he can run. Running is no problem. As for the protagonist's combat power, how can I put it? If he and Kaido take turns to fight, there will be no worries. Worry, Whitebeard will definitely be dragged to death if he doesn't run, but Whitebeard can definitely run. Don't always look at the data when fighting in the Pirate World. This thing is like the martial arts in China. This restrains that, and then there are factors such as skill and other factors. Except for Rocks, who seems to have crossed a big realm of others, everyone else is within the realm, which is similar to the body refining realm. Rocks is in the semi-foundation stage.

Although the writing style is jerky, the plot is interesting and the protagonist is decisive in killing, not a mindless mad dog.

Too little, hakizuo is too short

It's very interesting, the main plot is clear, and doing whatever you want in the world of pirates is in line with Chinese values. Very cool

Very good, five-star work

The writing is quite good, and there are no major flaws in the plot design. It's just that the details are a bit unclear, but it doesn't have much impact.

It's pretty good, kill kill kill, the only thing is that there is no quantification of intensity (some people like it, some people don't like it). Others are just minor problems for me, nothing major and I can't remember it.