[All-female cast] [Two female leads] [Cultivation] [Careful attention to terminology]
Xiao Zhi was a cultivator of the Way of All Beings, just one step away from ascending. With the heavenly tribulation drawing near, she fearlessly faced it, proving the Way with her own life and bringing her journey along the Way of All Beings to a perfect close. Then she attained the Dao, ascended, and became an immortal.
And then she transmigrated.
A self-proclaimed fraction-of-the-Heavenly-Dao, one nine ten-thousandth of it, appeared in her mind and told her she could only regain her cultivation and return to her own world by completing a mission.
Xiao Zhi swallowed her pride and agreed.
Become a disciple? Easy. Protect someone? Easy. Get in bed? Ea... Wait, what?!
Wasn’t the one she’d apprenticed herself to that cool and gentle immortal sect leader?
Who was this gloomy, seductive woman in front of her?
Why did she have the exact same face as her master?!
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Mu Qingyue had made the welfare of all under heaven her responsibility, sealing away all her emotions and desires.
The path to immortality was inherently heartless.
But one day, the clone in which she had sealed her desires escaped.
And it fled to the side of her only student.
Wearing a face identical to hers, it clung to and tempted the student.
Mu Qingyue said nothing, but in the dead of night, her eyes secretly reddened.
At last, she cornered her clone and her dear student on the bed and asked:
“Choose me, or her?”
It's quite good, the writing is nice, and it's not an AI novel. Each character's personality is clearly portrayed in just a few sentences, with many foreshadowing elements. So far, all the characters are female, and the only third-person pronouns used are "she" and "it," which is commendable. I really like the passionate Yan Qing, but unfortunately, I sensed a strong "loser" vibe.
The best books are written by authors who are honest, hardworking, and dedicated to their work every day. Don't worry about ratings; if you like the synopsis, just read it—it's incredibly good! 😄
There are really few all-female GL stories on Tomato, author, keep it up! The word choice is quite careful, but it would be even better if "disciple" could be replaced with something like "student" or "apprentice" (I remember "student" was used in the story before).
This is so good! Xiao Zhi and Mu Qingyue are such a sweet couple. The author's writing is excellent, and the emotional descriptions are very well done. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story, and I hope for a happy ending! 🥺
The main text is excellent, with a fresh and unique plot. The characters of Xiao and Mu are also very well-developed. I'm eagerly awaiting the side stories; I'll be personally waiting for them! Finally… I have a question: why is this book rated so low?! Only 6.8! I personally think this book should be above 8.5, Maybe even 9.0.
Mu's two personalities are both very interesting. One seems a bit aloof, but also a little bit silly and cute, a bit stubborn, but more like a tsundere. The other one is purely a hooker, especially good at flirting, has a strong older sister vibe, and is very straightforward and frank. Xiao is quite interesting in her interactions with this reserved person and that innocent one.
It's a pretty good read, the plot doesn't drag, and the reading experience is quite enjoyable. There might be a few minor transitions in the plot, and some parts and background information are kept from the reader (I'm wondering if Mu Qingyue will survive? It seems so difficult!), Which feels a little odd to me. But perhaps the author did this intentionally, so it's not a big deal. Keep up the good work, author!
This book is so good, I don't know why the rating is so low. I've been in a reading slump for months, and this one completely satisfied me. It has the right amount of angst where it needs to be, and the right amount of sweetness where it needs to be; in short, it's a superb novel.
I was actually waiting for the author to update, wondering why there was a sudden hiatus, only to find out it's finished! I'm begging the author, could you please release some extra chapters? I'm the kind of person who only comments after reading a complete story, and this is really well-written! 😆
A rare novel with a truly vibrant and lifelike feel, well-paced and tightly plotted. I was looking forward to the sweet side stories 🥺 I clicked into the homepage halfway through and found only one book; I hope next time I'll be surprised to find ten! (ε: ) Just kidding. I'm really looking forward to the author's new book.