Limbus: I'll Break the Cycle of the Cage and Forge the Path of the Monarch

Hello, master, your writing is sometimes good or bad, but Mysterious Red Persimmon is considered a good work. However, some of the plot developments are a bit inexplicable, and the rhythm is not very good. Summary: A-

The idea is very good, very perfect, but there is a problem. The writing style feels too sparse, the narrative rhythm is not very good, and the character description is quite abrupt. But your perfect and very creative creativity makes up for this. 4 Stars for encouragement. I hope that the writing will be smoother and clearer in the future.

Conclusion: A There are slight problems with the writing, and the turning point of the plot is very abrupt, but the plot itself is very well written and deserves to be called a masterpiece.

I unexpectedly found a treasure. The characters written by the author are rare in Tomato. The plot rhythm is very good so far. Please support me.

Your work... A+! ! ! Like a bright star in the city, this dark world needs works like yours to shine! ! ! ! ! (If you dare to stop updating, you will be gone!!!)

The plot is very good, and some parts are a bit like the original plot of the game.

Alas, now that things have come to this, let's rate ourselves [shy]

Very good plot, it was the umbrella in my hand that started Hagga! ! !

The plot seems good, but do you write a fanfic without considering readers who don't know the world view?

It's really, really good-looking and highly recommended [Chigua]