Train Survival: Lolo Lolo, Lili Lili

There's nothing sinister about it, I just haven't eaten it yet [angry] It's a bit too slow. There are more than a hundred women in the car [smiles] But it's okay. At least the emotional line is well written. There is also the aspect of loyalty [hit hard] It is not good to use loyalty to represent the love of the heroine. Either change it to favorability or add a favorability setting (the subordinates are loyalty and the heroine is favorability). Currently, the protagonist has no subordinates, and some are also in the car [eating melon] Just these two questions, this book is pretty good [exploration] and very interesting [eating melon] It's boring, isn't it? Why write it down if you don't accept it? Give it away [laughs awkwardly] Slipping away

"I estimate that it will take less than four or five days to complete the practice." Xu Tianheng said with a bitter smile. "Don't be afraid of difficulties. It's divided into 60 and 40%. Most of what you refine will be yours." Jiang Ye joked. "By the way, I was just about to say this. Let's forget about the 60% share. The 60% share for me is still too much, and I can't use so many elixirs. Let's change it to a 40% to 60% share." For Xu Tianheng, he felt that he had taken advantage of the sixty-four split at the beginning, so he happily agreed. But now that he is familiar with all parties and everyone is friends, he is no longer willing to take advantage of this. However, for Jiang Ye and others, the corpses of alien beasts have no other use than being used as food. The surplus can be exchanged for elixirs, which is a waste of money, so they are happy to get only 40% of it. Right? The protagonist is 60%, and he is 40%. Others are split 50-50. The author pretended to be dead!

Give it 5 stars. I was very excited when I saw all the lolita in the car coming in. It started off smoothly. When I saw that the protagonist had the authority to kick out the train crew, I thought there would be a plot like someone going against the protagonist, but it turned out there wasn't. It was handled very well. I really didn't want to watch that kind of cliche plot. The subsequent plot is mainly about fighting monsters and upgrading. The writing is actually pretty good, but unfortunately it is a bit bland and has no emotional points. The harem is indeed full of lolita, and the emotional descriptions are pretty good, but the post descriptions are a bit sparse, and the key plot points are all mentioned in one stroke. I hope to write more interactions with the cute little lolita, otherwise it will be a bit boring to just fight. And for the all-female train, I saw that other reviewers said that they would not accept many. What the hell, you have written a whole train of 119 girls, and then it is completely background. It is difficult to stretch. I believe that many people came in to watch the train after seeing the train full of lolita people. After a closer look, they found that it was completely a background board. How many people would want to continue watching? If you can't decide to write about too many people, you can reduce the number of people. For example, there are only about 50 people in a train. This way, it is easier to write about interactions with the lolita trains from time to time. To sum up, if you want to see a loli harem, you can really continue reading. At present, I have seen that the total number of possible and confirmed heroines in the 80 chapters is about 8. There will be many in the future, and indeed they are all loli with different styles. However, the descriptions in the posts are a bit sparse, which is really a pity.

I must praise the author's control over details. The logic of survival in the apocalypse is very realistic, not a brainless novel. The material distribution and crisis response are all written in a reasonable way. The protagonist's growth line and the heroine's bond line go hand in hand. There is no sense of separation at all. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. It's not a loss if you invest in it! Copy paste To be honest, this book is quite good, but some details were missed by the author. I'm talking about the kind of details that everyone wants to see, not the kind of details that everyone thinks. I also hope that the author can update at a speed of over 10,000 words a day. Looking forward to it

A very unique novel, definitely not because I am a lolicon, yes, definitely not

There is no poisonous point, but there is no memory point. It is very bland and will be forgotten after reading it. It is a very bland train survival. You can basically think of the subsequent development by looking at the front. If there is really no interesting book and you want to kill time, you can take a look.

It looks pretty good so far, but I want to ask the author a few questions. The first is whether the heroine will take it all, the second is whether the protagonist is wearing it, and the third is how long it will take to eat. My maximum tolerance is probably around 100 chapters, but there is really nothing I can do if there are too many chapters [face covering] @ of orange cat

Not bad [full] [full], the update is too slow [angry] [angry] [angry] I have been retired for a long time and only have more than 20 chapters [crying] I'm convinced. What are you writing next? I'm either fighting or on the way to a fight. Not only is the plot I like gone, but I'm also seriously depressed [angry][angry][angry]

It's okay, it looks very comfortable, and I don't feel bored at all.

In my opinion, the writing is very good, the emotions are very delicate, and there are not many poisonous points. You can read "୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧It's great" during your leisure time.