Multiple women + plot + original plot + daily life + own settings + Slytherin
Traveling to the world of Harry Potter, the invincible father + the love-minded mother and the indifferent him. Okay! This birth is almost like an orphan. If this is not a big problem, what did you say when you awakened your abilities at the age of 6? To celebrate my success in attending the ninja academy, what kind of nine-tails are you giving me as a reward? ? ? ?
The content of the Eight-Wizard Tournament + Goblin Rebellion + Hell Demon will be written according to the original work, with my own personal settings, and the entire story will not be skipped over in the next few years. The story of growing up will also be written according to the situation. Don't worry, it will not be unfinished or cut.
Reader comments
After reading it, there are still some problems, for example, the writing style seems a bit green, the intervals between some paragraphs are too long, and there are some mistakes in some details. But I enjoyed watching it, it was quite fun, and I somehow enjoyed reading it. Let's leave it at that.
It's well written, but too short. In chapter 14, I hope the heroine has a card sister.
I've seen so many hp fans. I really got a rare sense of satisfaction from this novel. In the third picture and later when I got along with Dumbledore, I felt a little timid. Other times it's great.
It's a good fanfic, it's average to Tomato, and it's interesting to watch.
Most of the previous fanfics have made minor changes to the plot, characters, and content. The changes are not bad, but unfortunately they can't connect with the plot or daily life. This is so many fanfics where the plot and daily life are well advanced. Of course, many female protagonists are very sweet in daily life.
I think it's pretty good, I just hope that the author won't write stupid or unfinished articles later. Generally speaking, the writing style is young but smooth. The setting of the world in hell is more attractive to me, and the emotional drama is okay. As long as the combat power is not broken, it is a good novel. Good luck, author [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Overall, it's okay. The worldview I derived basically matches the worldview of Harry Potter. It's just a bit of a headline. After all, I didn't see the system in the update.
Yes, it's not a sacred herb, but it can be considered a good herb and is worth a try.
Sit down, are you writing too fast? Why do I feel like it will be over in a few days?
Nice Hogwarts fanfic
Good to watch, watch more, love to watch
Great book, don't read the comments and talk nonsense [Like]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking.
Well, it's very suitable for me to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Not bad, very interesting
It's pretty good, I feel like it's okay
Rare high-quality HP cool articles
Five stars, has its own plot
Is the author's main job game planning?
I have read several hp fanfics about Naruto's power system, but this one is long and well-written. Good luck to the author! Five-star encouragement!
Incredibly good-looking
It looks great. Come on [Like]
Not bad, looks fun
Not bad, I hope it's finished!
Ok ok ok
The rating is a bit low
[Thinking] Take a look at whether this 6.0 Book is good or not
You are too poor. Although it is useless, it is better than nothing.
It's okay. Overall, it's more of a daily routine. Personally, there's nothing interesting about it.
After reading it, there are still some problems, for example, the writing style seems a bit green, the intervals between some paragraphs are too long, and there are some mistakes in some details. But I enjoyed watching it, it was quite fun, and I somehow enjoyed reading it. Let's leave it at that.
It's well written, but too short. In chapter 14, I hope the heroine has a card sister.
I've seen so many hp fans. I really got a rare sense of satisfaction from this novel. In the third picture and later when I got along with Dumbledore, I felt a little timid. Other times it's great.
It's a good fanfic, it's average to Tomato, and it's interesting to watch.
Most of the previous fanfics have made minor changes to the plot, characters, and content. The changes are not bad, but unfortunately they can't connect with the plot or daily life. This is so many fanfics where the plot and daily life are well advanced. Of course, many female protagonists are very sweet in daily life.
I think it's pretty good, I just hope that the author won't write stupid or unfinished articles later. Generally speaking, the writing style is young but smooth. The setting of the world in hell is more attractive to me, and the emotional drama is okay. As long as the combat power is not broken, it is a good novel. Good luck, author [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Overall, it's okay. The worldview I derived basically matches the worldview of Harry Potter. It's just a bit of a headline. After all, I didn't see the system in the update.
Yes, it's not a sacred herb, but it can be considered a good herb and is worth a try.
Sit down, are you writing too fast? Why do I feel like it will be over in a few days?
Nice Hogwarts fanfic
Good to watch, watch more, love to watch
Great book, don't read the comments and talk nonsense [Like]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking.
Well, it's very suitable for me to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Not bad, very interesting
It's pretty good, I feel like it's okay
Rare high-quality HP cool articles
Five stars, has its own plot
Is the author's main job game planning?
I have read several hp fanfics about Naruto's power system, but this one is long and well-written. Good luck to the author! Five-star encouragement!
Incredibly good-looking
It looks great. Come on [Like]
Not bad, looks fun
Not bad, I hope it's finished!
Ok ok ok
The rating is a bit low
[Thinking] Take a look at whether this 6.0 Book is good or not
You are too poor. Although it is useless, it is better than nothing.
It's okay. Overall, it's more of a daily routine. Personally, there's nothing interesting about it.
Not bad, I feel it's interesting