We’d Only Just Broken Up, and They Were Already Surrounding Me

Overall, it's not bad. If you're going to collect them all, the angst surrounding the breakup could be a bit more moderate; turning it into a master-servant dynamic would make it less enjoyable. It would also be better if the male lead had more character development and interacted more with the female lead, making his feelings for her more obvious. We'll see what happens next, since there aren't many episodes yet.

I've read the first book in this series before. Although this one is based on that book—I could predict the plot and characters, and they're pretty much the same—you can still tell the author put in effort. From what I've seen so far, it's not a complete copy; there are some innovative character developments, so it shouldn't be as heart-wrenching as the first one.

The plot is brimming with tension, offering a non-stop stream of satisfying moments. The characters are vividly portrayed, each female lead possessing her own charm, and the emotional turmoil is palpable. While some scenes are slightly idealistic, they don't detract from the overall reading enjoyment.

Teacher's perspective comments This composition is very vivid, bringing the characters in the story to life. The author skillfully captures the subtle details of the characters, making them seem as if they are standing right before your eyes through delicate descriptions. In terms of narrative, the plot is coherent and engaging, effectively holding the reader's attention.

The plot is fast-paced and incredibly satisfying. The characters are well-developed and follow the logic of a typical "cool" novel. While some plot points feel slightly forced, the overall reading experience is smooth and enjoyable. As a standard urban fantasy novel, it captivates readers with its intense emotional conflicts and the thrill of a comeback, making it an excellent choice for stress…

No doubt about it, this is the kind of satisfying read I love. The harem is so well-developed, and the author really knows how to make suggestive jokes! 😎

It's very well written and a comfortable read. Could you update more? Only 50 chapters and two updates a day isn't enough. At least two updates a day after chapter 100! 🤦 I once read a book where the author still maintained at least three updates a day even after writing over 400 chapters! 🤦

It's a pure, enjoyable read throughout, and aside from the slightly overly smooth description of the encounter with Lin Yaoyao, the rest of the story is logically consistent.

I feel very sorry for Shen Qingning. Even if she broke up with her, Shen Qingning is sorry for the original owner. She has not done any harm to the male lead. On the contrary, the male lead has been unable to treat her and none of her girlfriends and friends around her are good. I laughed to death. She is really a charlatan, especially that cousin.

After watching the comic, I came to read the novel. The opening chapter is very attractive. It's not a bad idea to slam your ex-girlfriend one night and then break up. It's even more fulfilling to win the girlfriend and best friends because they are all talented people. It would be even more awesome if there is no reward ability given by the system to be able to make a fuss after the breakup.