The Guide Big Sis Is Absolutely Stunning

After reading Chapter 18, I can only say that this is the most normal Xiang Shaowen I have ever seen in Yang Persimmon. There is no blushing shyness like a man is so handsome when he sees him. There is no sentry who starts harassing the guide as soon as he sees him. There is no one who can't put it down as soon as he sees a dog or stuffed animal, even if it is the spiritual body of the sentry! And the personality is very consistent with the previous settings, logical, normal female personality, normal male personality, no physical or verbal harassment, and shy and playful at every turn! ! ! It's really rare ah ah ah . . Well, overall it's pretty good, but sometimes the plot descriptions are really inexplicably awkward. For example, the heroine goes to the training room to dance. Can't she dance in the dormitory? There is a training room specially used for running sentries, just to create chance encounters for the plot, which embarrassed me to death. There is also a group of people dancing to the Rhythm Master on the way to the competition, also to highlight the heroine's good dancing. . . Why does a good article contain so many embarrassing plots?

The writing is very good. I finally found a normal Xiang Shao Wen. Teacher, you must work like a mule. The plot is very reasonable. The heroine is very charming, and there is no sense of flattery that the whole world serves the heroine.

The heroine is really excellent in her own right and works super hard. The author's language is really powerful. One of the male protagonists asked him why he worked so hard. The heroine asked the male protagonist (because this man is very powerful), aren't you the same? This passage is true: "Why do humans climb mountains? Those first pioneers who walked out of the shelter had no energy barrier and only relied on their flesh and blood to open up channels in the wilderness where alien beasts roamed. Most of them died on the road. But there are always people who continue to walk, continue to climb, and continue to plant their flags in higher, farther, and less reachable places. Because the mountain is there. Because the limit is there." I really feel that the heroine has her own opinions, has her own goals, works super hard, and is really a heroine who is slowly growing up. The relationship is well written here, it's just very warm. I don't just like it all at once, it's not the appearance, it's a kind of spiritual recognition (personal feeling). The heroine was also very beautiful at that time. There was no female competition, only every woman worked hard, and everyone had their own feelings of flesh and blood.

Finally, someone on the Western Persimmon still remembers the core of the original setting of Sentinel... Too many novels treat guides as tool men who can only do purification and guidance. In fact, the original Sentinel went to the battlefield together. The sentries have strong combat power and five senses to rush to the front, while the guide weaves a spiritual barrier for them to stabilize the rear of the battlefield. This kind of symbiosis and mutual assistance and dual strength is the original look of Sentinel 5555555

The writing is very good, everyone is normal, except for the sudden awkwardness in the middle Suddenly remembered something very important The author has marked many male protagonists. Are all men clean? Have they been guided by other guides? Okay, I found something surprising. The male protagonist has never clearly liked anyone else, but there are plots such as being with other members of the opposite sex, bending over gently, deliberately seducing, supporting her intimately, and finding her interesting. It's so estranged

It's very interesting and a very "normal" article. The author wrote something that touched my heart. The plot is very strong. Not everyone is mindless and revolves around the heroine. Whether they are bad guys, partners or the hero, they also have their own lives and the characters are very distinct. The heroine is not strong at the beginning. She is just an ordinary person, ambitious, and emotionally depressed, but then continues to move forward. However, the kpop dance aspect is a bit abrupt, but necessary. It is not important to say it, but it leads to how to get to know Ni Wu and Oliver becomes her fanboy, which brings out the great charm of the early heroine. But to say that it is important, it is a bit embarrassing to suddenly dance and participate in dance competitions. But I can't think of a better solution. If it is changed, the overall situation will change drastically. I would like to give some advice to the author. If the author already has an idea, you don't have to listen to it. After all, it is the author's article, and you know it best. Don't be influenced by our four differences: Look at the author's outline to see if it is a group portrait article. If there are a lot of other people's parts next, see if you should mark "micro-group portrait" or "partial group portrait" on the introduction. Otherwise, many people who only want to see the heroine will be attracted, and the audience will be different. . Why do you say normal? Xiang Shaowen cannot avoid the spiritual body, and the heroine likes furries (or insects?) Very much. How much does she like them? When you see an animal, you want to touch it (even if it's a different world, the body is right next to it, and you must feel the same way!!), Even if you know it's a spiritual body, you still have to ask if you can touch it. Also, I know the nature of food and sex, but I am often too pure-hearted and have few desires? Are you too perverted with the heroine? Lustful? Out of place. Male videos like to look at breasts and legs, while female videos like to look at breasts and abdominal muscles. Every time they see it, the protagonist, no matter how smart and powerful, seems to have lost his mind. Xiang Shao: Most of the female protagonists can't move their feet when they see their abdominal muscles. Even if they meet the male protagonist for the first time, their aura is very dangerous and they are rumored to be very dangerous, but they just can't control their hands to touch their abdominal muscles, or the male protagonist just catches his hand and touches it, and the female protagonist can't help but touch it a few more times. You can be lustful, but can you not lose your mind? That's why I said this article is normal. The heroine is finally out of her mind in this regard [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Love]

Super, super good-looking. Youbao is strong, brave and smart. She is motivated but not a spoiled wife. She will work hard to improve herself. The interaction with Shark is cute. The straight balls are delicious. Shark calls her "sister" and she is also delicious. And! ! I really have to praise the author's great plot design. I didn't expect that the heroine would see her savior in this way. It is so unique and reasonable, and she can see what happened in the actual combat simulation. Youbao and Puppy Shark fought side by side to defeat the insect mother. Youbao went from being powerless and passively waiting to pray for rescue, to being able to go into battle to "save" himself at that time and witness his own growth. Later, Puppy Shark tried his own challenge again. Even though he failed, it was great. He hoped that if he had been there at the time, he could have saved Youbao. Looking forward to the little snake, fox, and savior behind There are many more updates from the author, and the writing style is great! ! !

It's good. Guides can participate in military exercises, and there are shooting and combat training... Compared with forced matching of sentries, they can only guide the sentry text to a larger pattern, but there are too few. After watching it for a few days, I couldn't help but click on it and finished it in two hours.

For now, this article has some brains, is not coquettish, is not silly, has normal logic, and is not about poverty alleviation or charming men. Please write it better. Although it is said that people are obsessed with each other, it is not an unreasonable and inexplicable love at first sight. There is a process and it will happen naturally.

Sentinel guide text with rare settings and normal logic. The interstellar world is huge, with many planets and a large number of sentinel guides. PS: Those novels that only have a few white towers, one white tower and a few guides, make me feel that the whole novel is only one province in size at most. It is our ancestors' blessing that mankind has not become extinct. The heroine is very powerful, really amazing. The article sets the average age of 150 for ordinary people and 200 for sentry guides. I think it is too little. It is already in the interstellar era, and the lifespan of such a powerful superpower will not increase much after evolution.