A Mortal in the Modern World, Seeking Immortality

I've read Chapter 27. My brain hurts and I have to stop and rest. I'll write a review by the way. The advantage is that the author has a scientific explanation of aura, which makes people look refreshing. The plot is not vulgar. It is a breath of fresh air in this tomato. The disadvantage is that there are too many psychological descriptions or bad jokes! It has not stopped at all from the beginning to the present. This is a good way to shape the psychological state of a current college student, but it is too tiring for readers. I have to extract and pick out useful plot information and settings in the lines of Chinese characters. A friend in the comment area said it very accurately, Dialogue between Immortals. I can't do it anymore, retreat! My mind jumps too fast, and I have to read carefully to understand the plot, but reading the text carefully will cause harm to me - 1-1-1 blood deduction, one muscle is blocked at both ends. For example, I can only understand the two cases of Rorschach and the girl surnamed Xie in general. As a novel, it may not be qualified. At least half of the content is psychological description and jokes.

I used to fantasize about possessing spiritual energy (a high-tech device or the like) and then scientifically cultivating immortality. Then I would travel around the universe, see various planets and cosmic phenomena, and then build the earth into my own scientific research base. Unfortunately, I couldn't write it down. But to be honest, your writing is really sparse. The inner story of the protagonist is not marked, and there are too many jokes. It is not qualified from the perspective of a novel.

To be honest, this novel is quite good. However, the rhythm of this book is different from most novels. In addition, the protagonist likes to make up for the setting of the imagination, so you should read this book carefully and slowly. If you get distracted for a moment, you will not know what this paragraph is talking about.

How can I put it, it's still pretty good-looking, but it was a little dull in the early stage, with too little description of the supporting characters, but it started to get better later on, and now I've read Chapter 69, and I'm still quite satisfied with it, it's good-looking😋

Come and raise jellyfish here with me, earn 0 yuan a day, just to sting the author's butt ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ~ଳ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~

If it matches the brain waves, it's a masterpiece; if it doesn't match, it's a dialogue between immortals 🍉 The official attitude is very realistic. The psychological game transcends darkness and saint (salvation) stories. Many novels dare not explicitly state that political games have tampered or corroded the protagonist's three views. It often appears that the protagonist is led by the nose, leading to the two extremes of hero and anti-hero. The author's flow of meaning just makes up for the fact that the protagonist cannot think about this problem alone. All in all, it is extremely delicious😋

Identified as a novel growing on the meme

Should authors give their own books the first 5-star review?

This book is a very good explanation. I wrote it in whatever state I thought of.

I feel like there are some electric waves flowing, it would be nice if I can match them I feel like if the author changed the title of the book, more people might read it. The title now makes me feel like this novel is older than me.