A beginner writer, just writing for fun. ⚠️ The top characterisation is pretty average. A flirtatious, teasing type is hard to write.
If you came for this premise, please be prepared. If you don't like it, just drop it. Thanks.
Top POV, both pure, beautiful top and strong bottom, scheming flirtatious top who lures the bottom right in, 1v1
Xie Liao is the “ace male-support character” at the quick transmigration bureau. His job is to play devoted second male leads in romance worlds, silently give everything, bring the male and female leads together, and finally leave with a smile. The problem is, he’s gay. After putting up with it for thirty-seven worlds, he finally snaps and requests a transfer to the danmei channel.
His new mission: enter worlds with two male leads and target the “male supporting characters” in each one, the men whose lives have been twisted by the plot and who are destined to spend their lives alone. Xie Liao’s job is to get close to them, reel them in, and make them his.
1. Rising voice actor * stern, celibate CEO with a weakness for good voices
“You did it on purpose.” Ji Sinian’s voice was low. “From beginning to end, you did it on purpose.” Xie Liao didn’t deny it.
2. Mute, beautiful handyman * “Jade-Faced Yama” young marshal
“You’ve mistaken me for someone else, Marshal.” Huo Sinian stared at him, his eyes suddenly turning red. “You’re lying. I’ve remembered that voice for ten years.”
3. Refined, upright leader of the righteous sect * murderous undercover agent in the demonic sect
“You think you’re the one spying on me?” Xie Liao laughed softly. His smile was as gentle as ever, and yet somehow different.
Xie Liao smiled. Male supporting characters are all my type. I’ll lure them in, one by one.
Until, in the final world, the man he’d lured for seven lifetimes pinned him down. “Had enough of flirting? It’s my turn now.”
The protagonist, Xie Liao, has wasted his time in 37 mission worlds. From the very beginning, he's been hooked by the mission target every year, and then the system keeps pointing out behaviors from the protagonist's perspective, suggesting the target cares about him (the protagonist).
Because of the warnings in the comments section, I skipped the first world and read the second one first. The author's writing is quite good (•̀ө•́ ). However, sometimes the inconsistencies in the text are a bit noticeable. In the first chapter of this world, it says that the protagonist was forcibly brought there by his adjutant, but around chapter 17, it says that the adjutant found out where…
Increase the tension
It's always writing "no... No... Is..." The endings always include some inexplicable scene descriptions, like watching him laugh, and the dialogue between them is a bit dry. Adding more descriptions of facial expressions and actions would be helpful.