Myriad Worlds: The Saviors Take Action

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I really like this kind of gathering of self-rescuers. Save yourself first and then save others. You are not the kind of lone traveler who is used as capital behind the scenes or who is second best. There are some issues with the writing and pacing of the story, but I like the current tone of this book.

It's quite beautiful, but it's a pity that no one sees it. I would like to make a suggestion. The other salvation chat group articles I have read can be developed in batches to avoid writing each world too short. For example, breaking the iron to obtain the power of fate, and then solving the regional insect nest is the end of a temporary chapter, and then writing another world and using memories as nodes to write the development during the period to avoid The development is inconsistent, and it is obvious that the items in the golden finger can be exchanged with each other in the form of red envelopes, but you just don't do it (I wonder if you, the author, have not set it before? I will add it later). The protagonist Bengtie needs the mine cart of the protagonist Warhammer to mine quickly, and the protagonist Warhammer also needs the minerals of the protagonist Bengtie, which takes a long time. It was only given to the mine cart. The steam protagonist's talisman can withstand a fatal attack, but it was not given to the Ultra protagonist, causing him to be disabled (it is indeed a bit overwhelming). It may have these poisonous points, which is why not many people watch it. At least it can attract a group of Warhammer or Bengtie fans (after all, these two fandoms have more fans, and Qi Ye's fans do have them. But the appearance content is a bit too little), the characters who are not dead are brought in front of the protagonist (at least it can attract some character chefs), and most of the tomatoes like to read cool articles. It is indeed a bit unread when you write like this. I recommend you to read it. If you have different choices, join the chat group. You can imitate the writing method of the chat group.

Please forgive me for being a novice author, all the poisonous points have been changed. Including the bit that readers said was stupid. If it doesn't work, I'll change it. Don't just click and leave. Alas, new book title, new book cover, calling for submissions. [Laugh]

@Bi Xinghe The brothers are too long, and there is no clue at all about the main lines of their respective worlds. If you start a company like this, the company will be gone when it ends. Generous rewards shouldn't be enough to compensate, right? A branch plot is so long, and the main plot cannot be as long as the sky. The battle cannot be written directly by time and space dislocation, leaving only a few traces to express the intensity. Otherwise, if I have to write hundreds of chapters for an orc invasion battle in 40k, what will happen in the future?

Yes, the group portraits of Salvation are not the Virgin Mary. To me, they are pretty good-looking, but I don't know when the author will be able to update them. Okay, it's my turn to ask questions. Can MC's Poké Ball catch the zombie heroes in Marvel or catch Star Gods in the later stage? Can the mechanical enhancement in the non-arranged world give souls to the machines in Red Alert and catch them with the Poké Ball? Can other people use the things in the Supernatural Shop? Can the diamonds after this transformation be used for lottery draws or forging tools?

The latest chapter: Misanthropy is committed Believe it or not, if you use a mask to express your righteousness, it will choke you.

Rare type, good luck to the author Look at how long I am now

There are several worlds of good books that can be written individually, and they are all very capable second creations, and the author did not make any outstanding mistakes.

Since I have only read a few chapters, I don't know what to say.