From the Start, I'm a Secret Realm, Watching Cultivators Fight for Their Fortunes

There should be rules and requirements for low-level secret realms, and high-level warriors or immortal cultivators cannot enter.

Let's talk about the conclusion first. The pace is too fast. The protagonist is a secret realm. He upgrades by opening up one secret realm after another. The twelve levels break through to the second realm. This process takes 69 chapters, with an average of about five chapters per level, including the introduction of monsters on each level (ranging from one to three), the introduction of one wonder on each level, and the addition of one wonder every three levels. Holding, a short essay on the gestation process and breakthrough of the demon king and Nuogan demon elite, one for every three levels, because these named elite demons are reincarnated with their souls by killing people who enter the secret realm, so there are also introductions to these people, why they came to the secret realm, how they died, and the development of forces outside the secret realm... In short, the pace is too fast, the so-called genius dies too hastily, and too much content results in compressed writing. For example, the first three levels of the twelve-level secret realm are described in detail, and the last nine levels, especially the seventh level, are mostly covered in one go. Moreover, because the pace is too fast, the protagonist's own efforts are diluted, just like playing an invincible version of the mini-game. The difficulty of the boss battle before the reward is too low, leaving no impression. But I like this subject very much, and I still hope the author can write it well.

Two poisonous points. 1: The protagonist's subordinates can help the enemy defeat the protagonist. 2: The enemy is gradually strengthened to defeat the protagonist bit by bit. From ordinary people, to 1 to 2 levels of Qi training, to 3 to 4 levels, to the middle stage, to the late stage, to perfection in the late stage, to the 12th level of Qi practice, it is given to the protagonist in waves.

This type of villain management novel feels particularly interesting, the author's writing is good, and the battle scenes are also okay. There are very few novels of this type. Give five stars to support the author [like][like][like]

I finished the book. First of all, I got full marks for the concept, but I really wasn't very good at writing the major characters. Huaiyou has the most scenes, but what I'm most looking forward to is the strongest Lan Yue and Di Tian. However, Lan Yue took action once, and Di Tian was completely gone. Later, due to the direct situation, I realized the deity. The 9th level was very good because of Huai You's plan. The following levels were not very good. I really want to watch a few battles. Group portraits are difficult to write. But if you can write it, it will be particularly brilliant. Especially when several gold-level players cooperate with each other. Huaiyou makes plans and Guanyue cooperates. Di Tian and Lan Yue fight Jin Dan. Cang Long fights from the front. Meng Jizi fights from the rear. Xuan Hong and Ling Yi cooperate with Cang Long. That scene is simply explosive.

It's okay. I read 90 chapters in one go. Now there are many characters who don't know who they are. There are so many characters that it's too confusing to remember. There is no giant poison. If you have to say that the small poison is the tiger demon, it can't be controlled by the protagonist. In fact, it can be seen as not the same book starting from the opening of the blessed land.

It's too fast and too urgent. Can you slow down and be more steady? The story of upgrading and fighting monsters feels too fast.

The writing is quite interesting, okay

It looks very strange. Although it is a behind-the-scenes stream, I can't understand the specific combat power of the protagonist.

I think it's okay. Please support me.