The Sword Spirit Says I’m a Heartbreaker

Come on, author, I came here because of your update speed😋and your delicious main article😋😋😋

Suddenly I discovered that the author is an old acquaintance? ! The previous book had a female character who became a Taoist couple and it was very interesting. This one is still focused on writing. It's great! ! ! The author greatly encourages grain production

I've read a few chapters and decided to evaluate them 🤔 First of all, the author is very good at describing cool articles. He is happy when he should be happy, and he is not brainless. He maintains a certain quality while maintaining the update speed. Secondly, there is the pair of protagonists. I feel that the emotional connection between Duan and Xiao Zhuzi is not very good. The author may not be good at writing emotional dramas, and he has committed a common problem that is unique to Lily, but is relatively rare. That is, Duan's perspective is completely positioned as a "shuangwen male protagonist" in my opinion. Generally speaking, it's okay, and the ratings can be helpful. The author can look at more delicate emotional descriptions (you can learn from it, and you won't suffer from us readers if you suffer, I really want to read it😋), and change from the consciousness of "man's pleasure writing"

The author is really getting better and better, and his writing is getting better and better. I really like the DNF skill system in this game. Who wouldn't be amused by the poisonous milk powder vs. Immortal cultivator? The superficial villain of this film, Zhao Mingzhao, is very charming. It's a pity that we can't see more stories about the Zhao sisters (everyone is reunited, why don't we give the Zhao sisters a kiss too 😢 Let's satisfy Lao Zhao's wish and let her and her sister live a normal life) At present, it seems that based on the guest appearance of other protagonists in the author's book universe, it feels like the author's protagonists will be able to hold roundtable meetings in the future [laughter]

I finally saw a lively article, it's so cute! ! ! It seems that this is hand-typed by the author, and it is updated very quickly~ [Sentimental] I am almost driven crazy by those articles that use templates and are full of AI incomprehensible "This is not... But...!" [Face covering] I feel like there are fewer and fewer people reading this book...

This book is also good. Is the author Bai Yueguang's book also the main focus? So I went to read it. The writing is getting better and better, it's beautiful!

It's very good, very attractive in terms of characterization, writing, world framework, etc. Character creation: The two heroines, Xiaowei, are just like the title of the book when facing others, they can be a little irritable (but not violent), but in some details they are very considerate and consider the overall situation (will help friends whom they recognize, and will never let others go) He has a strong sense of community and is very friendly to his junior brothers and sisters. Emotionally, he also has a clear emotional journey towards Xiao Zhuzi (Chapter 106 is so powerful, the sentence "should we do it or not" made me feel moved 😳 As for Lingxi, I feel that there will be less shaping in the early stage, but it is also relatively normal, because she is a sword spirit and lacks knowledge of many aspects. In getting along with Xiaowei, she can feel and understand the world, and in some ways, even learn. You can see her entanglement and a little tsundere in the small details. I feel that the author has written a tsundere, which is very cute and cute. I'm looking forward to seeing her later changes and the author's characterization. In terms of writing style and world framework, many authors actually write about grand worldviews, especially those about cultivating immortals. It is very easy to not only make the audience feel uncomfortable, but also to achieve a very outrageous level of advancement. But this book is very well written. There is no three-year training to save the world, and it is not obvious that the heroine's master is a burden. If something goes wrong, he will not help, and the heroine can only rely on herself. The improvement in the realm of this article is not abrupt, and it makes the author feel happy; it has a few quirks in other aspects, but the plot logic is self-consistent. I think this is very commendable and worthy of praise 👍 👍 👍 And the emotions are integrated into the plot and not very abrupt, which is even more worthy of praise 👍 👍 👍 👍 I think the author must have put a lot of effort into this book, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. (Actually, I don't usually post long reviews, but this book deserves a five-star review to praise the author. Also, why is the rating so low? I really can't eat chaff. Don't be discouraged, author, I will always follow you 💕

Zhao Mingzhao is really strong. If she didn't have a system, everyone would be crushed by her intelligence. I don't know if Li Wudi can fight her. The strongest in modern times VS the strongest in history [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's quite beautiful [laughs]. It's very enjoyable to write. The pace is very good and not draggy. The two protagonists are very interesting. Emotional misunderstandings are solved directly. The relationship is healthy without stomachache. The two people get along so well. The other characters and CP are also very beautiful. Highly recommended.

New book support! Not long after I finished reading the author's last book, I saw it on the recommendation list. It's still so delicious and fits my taste 😋